Designs Revisited
From Yb Timeline
Top, Oshy and Topper were staring at the camera, saying nothing. Topper then turned to Top and Oshy. “We’re running out of ideas for the opening, aren’t we?”
-Topmonhit Story (Story 7: Designs Revisited, Part 7-1: Stormy Weather Ahead)
Designs Revisited is the 7th story of Topmonhit Story and the first storybook format one starring Team TOT. It finishes off the Orb Saga and has the Slubes return.
Characters (in order of appearance: Top Mon Hit, Oshy Gisho, Topper Mon Hit, Whacko, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Stormagon, King Rexor, Coshi, Plasshi, Subsourian the Dark, Egghold, Stuffwell, Dr. Tyrato, Numer, Professor Zeth, Cherry, Conrad the Conqueror, Slicer, Czar Speist, Rivep, Leader of the Guardians, Turkle, Blastard, Bloo, Mogmire, Scurf, Dryler, Lakeep, Zzub
Locations: Star World, Top's House, Near Mount Mushmore, Rexor's Castle, Star World Skies, The Sea, Toad Town, Forest of Illusion, Isle Delfino, Vanilla Dome
Time Period: September 2008
Story
Part 7-1: Stormy Weather Ahead
It all began one stormy night at Top's house. After some talking, Oshy saw a twister form out at sea, so he, Top, Topper and Whacko hurried into the basement. Meanwhile, at sea, a ship was flying towards the twister, inside of which was Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy and Anti-Topper. They began to attack the twister, causing Stormagon to come out; they attacked it with electrical surges, and a gray orb appeared, which they then took, bringing their orb count to 2.
Part 7-2: The Basics
The next day, everything was peaceful and serene, and the weather was nice. That is, until Oshy's Platinum Shroom rang and a hologram of Rexor appeared; apparently, Dr. Tyrato found the frequency the PS goes on, and sent them a message that he had kidnapped Apricot. He demanded that they bring the orbs to him or they wouldn't see her again, so they realized they need to get all of them, so they went to find those Anti-forms they had fought in Four Short Anecdotes That All Have Something In Common By Topmonhit. They gathered up guest stars, but found they only got Coshi, Plasshi and Sub. They decided to deal with it, though.
They found orb energy near Mount Mushmore, and quickly made their way there. They teleported into the castle, but accidently woke up Anti-Oshy, who was guarding. Sub turned him into a mushroom, though, and they headed deeper into the castle. They found the orb in a cage, but when Top ran at it, the cage exploded; Top was unharmed, though. Anti-Top and Anti-Topper came into the room, followed by Anti-Oshy. They then prepared to fight.
Part 7-3: The Super-Duper Ultra Special Part!
Topmonhit revealed this part to be the first RP part of Topmonhit Story, where everyone RP'd the part. The Anti-Forms formed the Super Anti-Team-Bot, with Anti-Top at the head, Anti-Topper connected to the robot, and Anti-Oshy as a weapon. They used Anti-Oshy against the robot, breaking the top and leaving Anti-Top defenseless. Anti-Oshy was defeated, and soon Anti-Top was defeated. Anti-Topper began to charge to full power, but they were able to destroy the robot and defeat Anti-Topper. They then obtained the brown and gray orbs, and prepared to go to Rexor's Castle.
Part 7-4: Wrapping Up the Story… Or Is It?
When they arrived at Rexor's Castle and entered, they saw a long stretch of a room with a long stretch of lava covering the ground, preventing them from getting to Rexor and Apricot on the other side. Rexor demanded they put the orbs down and leave; he said they saw her again there, but he never said he'd give her back. They refused to go, however, and Sub froze the lava with blizzard, causing Rexor to panic. When the heroes got to him, he jumped up and slammed the hardened lava, forming a deep hole going down to the bottom.
Believing they had won, the heroes went to untie Apricot, but a bullet bill nearly hit them and Dr. Tyrato appeared, using a jet pack to fly. They began to fight, Dr. Tyrato unleashing a recently-installed breaker beam from his headgear at them. They took vast harming, but decided to use a Team Attack that each of them helped out with. Except Oshy, so Oshy got the final hit in with a Grenade Egg and Dr. Tyrato was defeated. Apricot was untied, she and Oshy embraced, and Top threw up. They then left the castle, but from the hole Rexor made, a pair of claws appeared on the edge...
Part 7-5: Armada Battle Section 1
Top, Oshy and Topper were arguing in Top's Star Ship due to Apricot also being inside and there being very little room when Oshy asked why the story was still going on; it seemed that they had finished everything. Just then, Sub yelled to them to look out the window, and they saw a massive armada of ships off in the distance! They began to fight the armada, the capital ship of which looked like Blastard (but they didn't know it yet). The battle, however, continued into the next part.
Part 7-6: Armada Battle Section 2
The heroes continued fighting against the armada, but as the capital ship began to charge a massive beam, they began to be pressed for time. The Nightmare and Great Panaj began to charge their powerful weapons, leaving Top to attack the other ships, but the enemy's capital ship fired and blasted all three ships, causing them to fall into the sea below. Half an hour later, they came too, and began to repair their ships. Sub called for Scorch to scramble the troops, but then a giant turtle shell appeared. Sub simply blasted it away with Blast, but then something else began to come up.
Part 7-7: Orbs Revealed (Not A Long, but Singalong)
The something else slowed down, and the water around it died down, revealing Numer, Zeth and Cherry! Top recognized them, and began to sing of his past and how he met them while traveling the galaxies. He then realized those orbs were from their planet of Mintop. Numer explained the orbs were teleported away during a fray, and Sub sang! Conrad then appeared, singing, and they began to fight over the orbs. The orbs were accidently teleported away again, causing them to lose them, and Conrad left. Zeth had an extra tracker so that they could split up and search for the orbs, and the singing ended.
Part 7-8: I Saw You in Town
When they arrived in Toad Town to find the orbs, Slicer appeared, attacking Toads in the town. They fought Slicer and defeated it, then found an orb in the Li'l Oink Farm. In order to get it without disturbing the Li'l Oinks, Topper dug underground and got it. The nearest orb signature was located at Forest of Illusion.
Part 7-9: Um… they have a Czar
In the Forest of Illusion, the heroes remained on their guard lest anything appeared; just then, a stick floated into the air and tapped Topper's shoulder. It tried to wack him, but Topper Mach Punched it and a Speist came out; soon after, a bunch more appeared along with Czar Speist, and they fought. Once Czar Speist was defeated, a boo appeared and gave them the gray orb, and the nearest energy signature was found to be at Isle Delfino.
Part 7-10: Third Time’s the Charm
The heroes were walking through the Isle Delfino jungle when they saw a large snake in a tree; Top, however, didn't recognize him. He said he was Rivep, and he had the green orb, which he then ate and began to fight them. Rivep was eventually defeated, the orb gotten out of him, and Top inhaled it. Rivep tried to flee at first, but then came back, having grabbed Top with his tail. Top simply spat the orb to Sub, and Rivep escaped again. They decided to head to Toad Town to regroup with the Slubes.
Part 7-11: This Part Brought To You By Convenience Stores
There was a short promo for 7-11 stores, but Top ruined it by swallowing a big gulp drink, then eating a package of mentos, causing him to splurt soda all over the expensive cameras. The promo ended, and at Toad Town, they had gathered all 6 orbs... except there were 7. Zeth had located the final orb at Vanilla Dome, so they made their way there, where the door was closed. Suddenly they heard an evil laugh, a loud engine, and Rexor appeared, who revealed his new vehicle, The Tormentor. He began to chase them up Vanilla Dome; at the top, they made a sharp right turn and Rexor ended up driving off; he was out of fuel, though, so he crashed into the sea, and they all headed into the dome.
Part 7-12: Orb Brawl (Big Gulp Part)
When they entered Vanilla Dome, they found a large, expansive room, as well as the seventh guardian, who was about to give them their challenge when Conrad burst in and attacked them. Although he seemed to be outnumbered, Conrad soon brought in the rest of his minions, and they all fought against one another. Each of Conrad's minions were defeated: Slicer, Turkle, Czar Speist, Blastard, and Rivep. Conrad began to use a large earthquake attack when a smash ball appeared; Oshy grabbed it, and used his final smash to defeat Conrad.
They then returned to the guardian, who said what they had done was good enough for him, and that the ther guardians weren't evil, simply protecting the orbs. Except Magnocoden, which was a bit more wild. Now that they had all seven orbs back, Numer, Zeth and Cherry prepared to return to their planet.
Meanwhile, the other characters of the Orb saga appeared. Bloo and Mogmire were still stuck underwater, Yosheo and Yoshiet lived happily after never appearing again, the Fearsome Five hadn't gone back into the jungle since Four Short Anecdotes That All Have Something In Common By Topmonhit, Whacko had gone to Mt. Rugged and taught the whackas there self-defense, Chompy, Lysh, Clast and Scurf went back to never appearing (except Scurf got a new job as Dr. Scurf, Master Hand continued to host tournaments with Sandbag as the receptionist, the X-Nauts went into The Oddtastic Adventure, Rexor returned to his castle, Conrad and his minions eventually returned to Mintop, and Wally Plotch went on vacation.
Character Introductions
- STORMAGON
Stormy Holder of the Gray Orb - SUPER ANTI-TEAM-BOT
Robot Opposed to Goodness - DR. TYRATO
Not-So-Mad Scientist - SLICER
Killer Buzzsaw on the Loose - CZAR SPEIST
Powered-Up Ruler of Speists - RIVEP
Acid-Spewing Snake - REXOR
Rex King For Revenge - THE CONQUERER
Conquering Octo-Thing of Doom
Trivia
- This is the first Team TOT story not to have Team Flash appear (excluding a cameo at the very end).
- Part 7-3: The Super-Duper Ultra Special Part! did not originally plan to be an RP part, but the part was lost in a storm, and so Topmonhit decided it would work out well as an RP part.
- The order Conrad's minions appear in is the original order of the minions: Blastard, Turkle, Slicer, Czar Speist, and Rivep; Cagnorm didn't appear (due to being stuck in a volcano). The new order is Slicer, Turkle, Czar Speist, Blastard, Rivep, Cagnorm.
- The placeholder name in Topmonhit's list of stories was "Guardians of the Orbs".
Connections to Other Stories
- This story finishes off the Orb Saga began with Four Short Anecdotes That All Have Something In Common By Topmonhit.
- Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy and Anti-Topper would later return in The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer, revealing to have been made by The Dark Perforation.
- Rexor wouldn't appear again until Return to Gisho.
| Preceded by: Grodus Rising | Timeline Designs Revisited | Followed by: The Oddtastic Adventure |
| Preceded by: Jinjo Crossing: The Novel | Topmonhit Story Designs Revisited | Followed by: Slubes |
