Revenge on SWDF

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Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].
Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].
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Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]]
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Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]]
Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon
Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon
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===Part 16-2: The Raptor Trio===
===Part 16-2: The Raptor Trio===
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Ripvor was just about to enter the fortune teller's place when he heard Dr. Scurf say his name, and Ripvor grabbed him, asking him how he knew his name. Shnalk asked Ripvor if he could put Dr. Scurf down, and Dr. Scurf explained they had done some investigation for a television show about the disappearance of [[The Raptor Trio]]. Ripvor muttered the SWDF, and they went back to Shnalk's place for an explanation.
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The Raptor Trio was explained, including the members: Ripvor, the leader, Torvin, the strongest, and Caldia, the strategist. A few months ago, however, they disappeared. Shnalk explained to Ripvor that some eyewitnesses said they saw Torvin and Caldia killed while Ripvor had only been injured. Ripvor immediately ran, leaving Shnalk and Dr. Scurf behind. There was a flashback, where it was shown that an SWDF soldier was about to shoot Caldia, who was eating the remains of a stegosaurus, when Ripvor attacked the soldier.
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The Raptor Trio and the soldiers began a stand-off until a shot was heard and they started fighting, ending in Caldia and Torvin being killed and Ripvor being injured. They took the bodies and attempted to hide them to avoid anyone finding out about the mistake. Back in the present, Ripvor was returning to The Ratpor when he saw Chimeck in front of it. She told him his plan of revenge would fail, and Ripvor told her to leave, so she simply did.
===Part 16-3: This Part Has the Tavern Scene. Oh, and a New Character!===
===Part 16-3: This Part Has the Tavern Scene. Oh, and a New Character!===

Revision as of 23:57, 3 June 2009

"Was there bloodshed on that day, many years ago? The records say no. But the records are not always completely correct... This has been News Guy in November, 2008."

-News Guy, Topmonhit Story (Story 16: Revenge on SWDF; Part 16-1: Return to Rareworld)

Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after Grodus Rising.

Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, Amphy (flashback), Ripvor, Eli, Christopher (flashback), Dr. Scurf, Shnalk Serpolm, Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), Chimeck

Locations: Rareworld, Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon

Time Period: Mid-November to Mid-December 2008

Contents

Story

Part 16-1: Return to Rareworld

At Terrydactyland, News Guy was doing a special on the SWDF, where there were rumors that they had shot someone there. After interviewing Dippy for a bit, he showed that bullets had been found at the supposed site, but didn't say anything definite. Meanwhile, The Raptor, Ripvor had a flashback to Grodus Rising, when the conscripts freed him from the Gadd Instillation. He had hoped that things were all right and that the SWDF hadn't kidnapped his brother and sister, Torvin and Caldia.

When he arrived at Rareworld, he went to Terrydactyland and began looking for his siblings, but couldn't find them anywhere, even at their hideout. He then remembered there was a fortune teller at Jolly Roger's Lagoon that he might be able to get help from, so he rushed off to there. After arriving, he ran past Dr. Scurf, who was bringing some groceries back home. After Ripvor went by, Dr. Scurf recognized him and went to get Shnalk.

Part 16-2: The Raptor Trio

Ripvor was just about to enter the fortune teller's place when he heard Dr. Scurf say his name, and Ripvor grabbed him, asking him how he knew his name. Shnalk asked Ripvor if he could put Dr. Scurf down, and Dr. Scurf explained they had done some investigation for a television show about the disappearance of The Raptor Trio. Ripvor muttered the SWDF, and they went back to Shnalk's place for an explanation.

The Raptor Trio was explained, including the members: Ripvor, the leader, Torvin, the strongest, and Caldia, the strategist. A few months ago, however, they disappeared. Shnalk explained to Ripvor that some eyewitnesses said they saw Torvin and Caldia killed while Ripvor had only been injured. Ripvor immediately ran, leaving Shnalk and Dr. Scurf behind. There was a flashback, where it was shown that an SWDF soldier was about to shoot Caldia, who was eating the remains of a stegosaurus, when Ripvor attacked the soldier.

The Raptor Trio and the soldiers began a stand-off until a shot was heard and they started fighting, ending in Caldia and Torvin being killed and Ripvor being injured. They took the bodies and attempted to hide them to avoid anyone finding out about the mistake. Back in the present, Ripvor was returning to The Ratpor when he saw Chimeck in front of it. She told him his plan of revenge would fail, and Ripvor told her to leave, so she simply did.

Part 16-3: This Part Has the Tavern Scene. Oh, and a New Character!

Part 16-4: Don’t They Put Bathrooms In Those Ships?

Part 16-5: The Conscripts (1/3)

Part 16-6: Attack on Peach’s Castle

Part 16-7: The Hero of the Mushroom Kingdom

Part 16-8: Who?!

Part 16-9: The Fight Is On

Part 16-10: The Raptor’s Tail (Doublah Part)

Trivia

Connections to Other Stories

  • This story follows the events after Grodus Rising, of which Ripvor was a guest star.
  • The events of King Top are mentioned when Sub first appears.
  • Ripvor would later return in The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer, still in the Beanbean Kingdom. Accordiono and I.M. Ugly would also return in the story, but now in The Mushroom Kingdom.

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Preceded by:
A Snifit's Vendetta
Timeline
Revenge on SWDF
Followed by:
King Top

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