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I've had an idea for some intruders for The Ghost of the Mansion. How about a male photographer and a pair of bikini models, who plan to use the mansion for a photo shoot?
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Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. There's been so much going on in my life that I haven't been doing much writing lately, and I am trying to focus my efforts on things that might actually earn me money, rather than just hobby writing.
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I don't rule out contributing to your Cassie story-lines at some point in the future, but I don't see me making much of a contribution at present.
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Regards, SergeantC
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It would be okay if you ended that particular storyline. As a matter of fact I am working on another interactive story right now with planned out endings - you should check it out. I haven't gotten far yet but I have about 30+ planned out chapters already. It's called [[Cassie's Horrible Family]], which is a subcategory of [[The Exciting Adventure]]. In the storyboard I have a lot of chapter titles already planned out.
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The difference with that story is that you have to make sure that the chapter fits with what could happened. For instance, if someone picked the storyline where she wasn't stripped naked, you may have to plan for both that and if someone choose not to have her strip naked. Read what I have so far and you may get what I mean.
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Cheers - Uman
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Thanks for your kind offer. I think I'll pass. The Cassie's Horrible Family story just hasn't struck a chord with me to resonate with my writing: it's a great storyline and I hope you finish it and find contributors for it. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]
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How do you feel about ending stories? I have an idea for an ending to the Hazing path I've started, that will wrap up the story in such a way that Katie will learn that her humiliation from the incident will never really end. However, the incident itself will be over.
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I was indeed thinking of Maisy from Ghost of the Mansion. She seems to me to be the best candidate.
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What story are you interested in? I think something with Maisie might work, especially if you're willing to show some nudity in your comic.
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I've added a chapter to The Humiliation of Katie, in the 18-year-old category. I hope it's not too over the top. Feel free to edit if it is. SergeantC
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I've got an idea for possible intruders for The Ghost of the Mansion. How about a male photographer and two bikini models who want to use the mansion for a photo shoot? -- SergeantC
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'''Cassie's Horrible Family'''
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I would love to help you out with your story. However I'm am slightly confused with the story line page. Is these the only story lines allowed or are they just the main ones and others can be added. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
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== Ghost of the Mansion ==
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Thanks for the message. I've been busy with other things, but I'll try to add chapters to the story if I have time. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 17:42, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
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== Humiliation of Katie (More Kids) ==
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Thanks for contributing to the thread I created, but I wanted the "more kids?" chapter to take place after Katie's first child's first year at elementary school. I wanted more opportunities for Katie's young children to be manipulated by Aunt Jill or have the same bad luck with their clothes as their mother. I intended to have a chapter for when the children are older as well, and they can have more adventures with or without Katie. My idea is that when Katie is mature enough, she won't be bothered by her own nudity, and no one would be as interested in her as her children at some point.
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I just want to get your approval to edit the chapter to reflect my ideas, since it currently doesn't line up with the other chapters I created for her first child.
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== Humiliation of Katie (kids) ==
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I just edited the "More Kids" chapter, and changed the way the chapters flow, so the "Katie's Children" chapter is now the hub for whatever children she ends up having. I hope it's easy to follow.
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==Cassie==
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Hey, I found your stories about Cassie because I have a character called Cassandra in my story [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]].  Your stories are well written, so I am slowly reading my way through them.  Feel free to link my story to your Exciting Adventure story hub if you like, as its possible that the Cassy I write about is the same girl in a parallel universe.
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If you like my story, please leave any comments, criticisms or ideas on the story [[Talk:The_Punishment_of_Claire_and_Cassandra|talk page, here]], so that I can improve it  [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 18:51, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
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==War13==
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War13's contributions are back.  I trust you to fix them up. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 7 September 2015 (UTC)
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==New Rules==
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I've got plenty of revising to do in my own stories, so I'm not even looking at anyone else's contributions at this time.  You should go ahead and make any changes you think are necessary however.  RobKohr is the one who made the decision to change policy here, and if he decides to mass delete offensive pages, he has every right to go ahead and do so. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:10, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
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RobKohr hasn't stated what the limitation is, but I'm also assuming it's 18. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:51, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
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Hey, if you want a place to move your stories where they are acceptable as is, feel free to join '''stories.allthefallen.ninja''' if you would like.  (Yes it's a real site, but the system hates it when I try to post external links). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 09:07, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
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Hi there! I apologize for the fact that it has taken me so long to speak to you or anyone else on one of these discussion pages but I just wanted to send this message to you to ask about my contributions to your story. The passing off partial nudity section is one of my favorite parts in the story but it's listed in one of the multiple sections that need to be edited or scraped because of the new rules. The Crisis of Chelsie might be ok because we never specified what her age is but it still might need revisions. Is there anything mandatory that I should change in the next couple of weeks? --[[User:AccidentalAddict|AccidentalAddict]] 05:50, 16 October 2015 (UTC)
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RobKohr's way of enforcing the rules against underage sex is a word filter.  Even if the dread P word is used to refer to behavior that no one is engaging in, the filter will block the page that it appears on.  In the instance you referred me to, I changed the dread P word to 'child molesters'.  The character's comment remains essentially the same, but the filter is okay with it.  Yes, an unthinking word filter is a truly obnoxious way of dealing with the underage sex crisis, but if you've got an alternative, suggest it to RobKohr.  Maybe he'll consider some other solution. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:49, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
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== Loving The Humiliation of Katie ==
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The story is incredibly well-written.  I love the continuity between ages and events that ties everything together.  Too bad the first few sections have some pending changes.
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I did bump into one minor continuity flaw, when Katie is 16, during the Walk to School in the Rain section.  She mysteriously develops a bra after the into to the series mentions that she has just enough time for panties, dress and shoes.  I figured it would be better to point it out to you than to go back and edit it without permission.
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Regarding the new ban on content here:  My personal life is fairly busy, as well, but I'd be willing to lend a hand when I can to fixing up those sections.  The good news, from having just read through them, is there is very little mention of age within the actual threads, which should make tidying it up a little easier.
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Also, a final question:  Would it be feasible to launch an alternate Forest entry (Katie is 23, Series 4, Road Trip)?  The initial set-up piqued my interest, but a lot of my ideas aren't feasible with how quickly she was stripped in the intro section.  If not, I can always look at spinning a few of them into the desert and mountain entries instead.
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Thanks for the awesome source material, and hope to hear from you soon! - [[User:jealco|jealco]] 21:05, 20 October 2015 (PST)
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Already started the desert line.  I'm finding it a bit more challenging to write to a desert than a forest, but I'll get what I can out.  The first few chapters are up.  Feel free to holler or edit them if something needs changing, or if you've got a better idea.
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I'll piece together my forest stuff over the next few days, and toss it up as an alternate Lost in the Forest arc.  I'm going to be rather busy through this weekend, but I'll let you know when I set them up. - [[User:jealco|jealco]] 18:18 21 October 2015
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== The Humiliation Of Katie - TheSilence ==
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Hey man i know i've been writing in your story and its because it interested me deeply how it was written and the interesting situations within it but if you ever dont like what i have written or had a better idea yourself please dont hesitate to take my post down and place up your own i love your writing style and the way you describe things i just started adding because i saw one tree that i really wanted to see to completion and looked like no one was going to pick it up then i just couldnt stop myself from writing!!!
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sorry if i ruined things that you had in mind ;P
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yeah man sounds great to me! i'm really glad you have such an open attitude about it! i dont quite know how consistent i will be but that sounds pretty good! being a writer i often fall into a writers block and just nothing quite comes to mind but also that means i have creative stretches where i may write 5 or 6 chapters in a couple days! (also ive been trying to make sure to keep katie unwilling to do things but putting her in situations where they happen anyway to preserve her character as i think that is kind of what you were going for?)
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p.s. i will never do anything with the "need to bathroom" not my fetish personally, so if you want to do something with that i will leave it to you to add an option or add to the story just thought i would let you know
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Hey dude. I've been adding some chapters to the Crisis of Chelsie - Mall / Towel section. Would you be able to add them to the recently written chapter section?
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There's a website called "chyoa.com" that hosts adult interactive stories. It has a great organization structure that lets you add seemingly infinite chapters to each part. The only drawbacks are that you have to wait for an admin to approve your story before anyone else can see it and add to it, but if you create a couple chapters that seem like you know what you're doing, it should be approved within a day.
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Another possible draw back is that not as many people know about the site. But this means that you have more potential for different ideas instead of the same ones from writing.com and here.
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The MAJOR advantage of using the site besides the unlimited options for chapters is that it automatically creates an outline that makes it easy to know which chapters have been edited, read, and unread. Another is that it also makes linking chapters easy if you want the reader to be able to jump to different parts of a day or anywhere in the timeline.
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I apologize if you already know about it, but I can't say enough about how much I enjoy the site. You can even set moderator modes for new chapter submissions on your stories so you can choose which users are allowed to automatically add, or if you want to screen all chapters so no one will derail, delete, or otherwise sabotage your story without your input.
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Anyways, I hope you think about posting some of the chapters from your stories here to chyoa.com
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Thanks, Ewong
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I want to second what Ewong has said below - have you considered moving the Humiliation of Katie over to Chyoa.com? I do love this story but this website makes it very difficult to see when there's been an update. I know you try your best to update the chapter page, Uman, but it's still difficult to keep track of things.
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- I agree with you guys, I fell behind on the chapter index and its basically useless now. I am fine with moving the story over, but I don't have as much time as I used to. If someone else could transfer it or if I started it then gave you guys the ability to expand it then we could move it over. Perhaps just transferring over entire trees at once would be best. - Uman

Current revision as of 00:29, 1 October 2016

Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. There's been so much going on in my life that I haven't been doing much writing lately, and I am trying to focus my efforts on things that might actually earn me money, rather than just hobby writing.

I don't rule out contributing to your Cassie story-lines at some point in the future, but I don't see me making much of a contribution at present.

Regards, SergeantC

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It would be okay if you ended that particular storyline. As a matter of fact I am working on another interactive story right now with planned out endings - you should check it out. I haven't gotten far yet but I have about 30+ planned out chapters already. It's called Cassie's Horrible Family, which is a subcategory of The Exciting Adventure. In the storyboard I have a lot of chapter titles already planned out.

The difference with that story is that you have to make sure that the chapter fits with what could happened. For instance, if someone picked the storyline where she wasn't stripped naked, you may have to plan for both that and if someone choose not to have her strip naked. Read what I have so far and you may get what I mean.

Cheers - Uman

Thanks for your kind offer. I think I'll pass. The Cassie's Horrible Family story just hasn't struck a chord with me to resonate with my writing: it's a great storyline and I hope you finish it and find contributors for it. -- Teejay

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How do you feel about ending stories? I have an idea for an ending to the Hazing path I've started, that will wrap up the story in such a way that Katie will learn that her humiliation from the incident will never really end. However, the incident itself will be over.

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I was indeed thinking of Maisy from Ghost of the Mansion. She seems to me to be the best candidate.

What story are you interested in? I think something with Maisie might work, especially if you're willing to show some nudity in your comic.

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I've added a chapter to The Humiliation of Katie, in the 18-year-old category. I hope it's not too over the top. Feel free to edit if it is. SergeantC

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I've got an idea for possible intruders for The Ghost of the Mansion. How about a male photographer and two bikini models who want to use the mansion for a photo shoot? -- SergeantC

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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 02:20, 29 November 2013 (UTC)

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Cassie's Horrible Family

I would love to help you out with your story. However I'm am slightly confused with the story line page. Is these the only story lines allowed or are they just the main ones and others can be added. Sophie4C 07:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Great idea

Uman, I noticed your story board. <3 the idea ^.^ Thanks for the great idea, think I will use it for my own story, too.

lol, I sooo wanted to add "Cannot resist...must edit" to that page xD--Dirty Me 13:35, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Are you referring to that new story I posted for splotch? Does your naughtiness know no bounds? - Uman

lol, you should probably put it on my talk page, or I might not get the message. Well, I am Dirty Me=P I am rather naughty ←～（o ｀▽´ )oΨ --Dirty Me 14:16, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

If you create a new page and the links are already blue, edit your page and change your links. Do not write over existing pages from other stories. Your editing has been reverted.--Platypus 22:53, 2 July 2014 (UTC)

Ghost of the Mansion

Thanks for the message. I've been busy with other things, but I'll try to add chapters to the story if I have time. AgentVincent 17:42, 17 August 2014 (UTC)

Humiliation of Katie (More Kids)

Thanks for contributing to the thread I created, but I wanted the "more kids?" chapter to take place after Katie's first child's first year at elementary school. I wanted more opportunities for Katie's young children to be manipulated by Aunt Jill or have the same bad luck with their clothes as their mother. I intended to have a chapter for when the children are older as well, and they can have more adventures with or without Katie. My idea is that when Katie is mature enough, she won't be bothered by her own nudity, and no one would be as interested in her as her children at some point.

I just want to get your approval to edit the chapter to reflect my ideas, since it currently doesn't line up with the other chapters I created for her first child.

Humiliation of Katie (kids)

I just edited the "More Kids" chapter, and changed the way the chapters flow, so the "Katie's Children" chapter is now the hub for whatever children she ends up having. I hope it's easy to follow.


Cassie

Hey, I found your stories about Cassie because I have a character called Cassandra in my story The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra. Your stories are well written, so I am slowly reading my way through them. Feel free to link my story to your Exciting Adventure story hub if you like, as its possible that the Cassy I write about is the same girl in a parallel universe.

If you like my story, please leave any comments, criticisms or ideas on the story talk page, here, so that I can improve it Hornlarry 18:51, 11 May 2015 (UTC)

War13

War13's contributions are back. I trust you to fix them up. --Platypus 15:56, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

New Rules

I've got plenty of revising to do in my own stories, so I'm not even looking at anyone else's contributions at this time. You should go ahead and make any changes you think are necessary however. RobKohr is the one who made the decision to change policy here, and if he decides to mass delete offensive pages, he has every right to go ahead and do so. --Platypus 23:10, 3 October 2015 (UTC)

RobKohr hasn't stated what the limitation is, but I'm also assuming it's 18. --Platypus 00:51, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey, if you want a place to move your stories where they are acceptable as is, feel free to join stories.allthefallen.ninja if you would like. (Yes it's a real site, but the system hates it when I try to post external links). --Elerneron 09:07, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi there! I apologize for the fact that it has taken me so long to speak to you or anyone else on one of these discussion pages but I just wanted to send this message to you to ask about my contributions to your story. The passing off partial nudity section is one of my favorite parts in the story but it's listed in one of the multiple sections that need to be edited or scraped because of the new rules. The Crisis of Chelsie might be ok because we never specified what her age is but it still might need revisions. Is there anything mandatory that I should change in the next couple of weeks? --AccidentalAddict 05:50, 16 October 2015 (UTC)

RobKohr's way of enforcing the rules against underage sex is a word filter. Even if the dread P word is used to refer to behavior that no one is engaging in, the filter will block the page that it appears on. In the instance you referred me to, I changed the dread P word to 'child molesters'. The character's comment remains essentially the same, but the filter is okay with it. Yes, an unthinking word filter is a truly obnoxious way of dealing with the underage sex crisis, but if you've got an alternative, suggest it to RobKohr. Maybe he'll consider some other solution. --Platypus 00:49, 6 November 2015 (UTC)

Loving The Humiliation of Katie

The story is incredibly well-written. I love the continuity between ages and events that ties everything together. Too bad the first few sections have some pending changes.

I did bump into one minor continuity flaw, when Katie is 16, during the Walk to School in the Rain section. She mysteriously develops a bra after the into to the series mentions that she has just enough time for panties, dress and shoes. I figured it would be better to point it out to you than to go back and edit it without permission.

Regarding the new ban on content here: My personal life is fairly busy, as well, but I'd be willing to lend a hand when I can to fixing up those sections. The good news, from having just read through them, is there is very little mention of age within the actual threads, which should make tidying it up a little easier.

Also, a final question: Would it be feasible to launch an alternate Forest entry (Katie is 23, Series 4, Road Trip)? The initial set-up piqued my interest, but a lot of my ideas aren't feasible with how quickly she was stripped in the intro section. If not, I can always look at spinning a few of them into the desert and mountain entries instead.

Thanks for the awesome source material, and hope to hear from you soon! - jealco 21:05, 20 October 2015 (PST)

Already started the desert line. I'm finding it a bit more challenging to write to a desert than a forest, but I'll get what I can out. The first few chapters are up. Feel free to holler or edit them if something needs changing, or if you've got a better idea.

I'll piece together my forest stuff over the next few days, and toss it up as an alternate Lost in the Forest arc. I'm going to be rather busy through this weekend, but I'll let you know when I set them up. - jealco 18:18 21 October 2015

The Humiliation Of Katie - TheSilence

Hey man i know i've been writing in your story and its because it interested me deeply how it was written and the interesting situations within it but if you ever dont like what i have written or had a better idea yourself please dont hesitate to take my post down and place up your own i love your writing style and the way you describe things i just started adding because i saw one tree that i really wanted to see to completion and looked like no one was going to pick it up then i just couldnt stop myself from writing!!!

sorry if i ruined things that you had in mind ;P

yeah man sounds great to me! i'm really glad you have such an open attitude about it! i dont quite know how consistent i will be but that sounds pretty good! being a writer i often fall into a writers block and just nothing quite comes to mind but also that means i have creative stretches where i may write 5 or 6 chapters in a couple days! (also ive been trying to make sure to keep katie unwilling to do things but putting her in situations where they happen anyway to preserve her character as i think that is kind of what you were going for?)

p.s. i will never do anything with the "need to bathroom" not my fetish personally, so if you want to do something with that i will leave it to you to add an option or add to the story just thought i would let you know

Hey dude. I've been adding some chapters to the Crisis of Chelsie - Mall / Towel section. Would you be able to add them to the recently written chapter section?

new home for our stories?

There's a website called "chyoa.com" that hosts adult interactive stories. It has a great organization structure that lets you add seemingly infinite chapters to each part. The only drawbacks are that you have to wait for an admin to approve your story before anyone else can see it and add to it, but if you create a couple chapters that seem like you know what you're doing, it should be approved within a day.

Another possible draw back is that not as many people know about the site. But this means that you have more potential for different ideas instead of the same ones from writing.com and here.

The MAJOR advantage of using the site besides the unlimited options for chapters is that it automatically creates an outline that makes it easy to know which chapters have been edited, read, and unread. Another is that it also makes linking chapters easy if you want the reader to be able to jump to different parts of a day or anywhere in the timeline.

I apologize if you already know about it, but I can't say enough about how much I enjoy the site. You can even set moderator modes for new chapter submissions on your stories so you can choose which users are allowed to automatically add, or if you want to screen all chapters so no one will derail, delete, or otherwise sabotage your story without your input.

Anyways, I hope you think about posting some of the chapters from your stories here to chyoa.com

Thanks, Ewong

I want to second what Ewong has said below - have you considered moving the Humiliation of Katie over to Chyoa.com? I do love this story but this website makes it very difficult to see when there's been an update. I know you try your best to update the chapter page, Uman, but it's still difficult to keep track of things. 

- I agree with you guys, I fell behind on the chapter index and its basically useless now. I am fine with moving the story over, but I don't have as much time as I used to. If someone else could transfer it or if I started it then gave you guys the ability to expand it then we could move it over. Perhaps just transferring over entire trees at once would be best. - Uman
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