User talk:Kyre

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You broke the category link. I fixed it for you, but you need to pay attention. I also notice you broke a couple links that were already blue. So, how will you link to those pages you had previously created? --Dirty Me 05:35, 29 March 2016 (UTC)

I was unhappy with the set up, so I'm redoing the beginning. It's mostly the same, so there won't be much harm.

If possible, can you leave a reply on my user talk page? User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime. Then I will get the "You have a new message" message. Otherwise, the only way I might know is if I see that you modified your talk page. Next, since you broke the links, it would be better if you could delete everything on the page, blanking it. This will let Platypus know that the page is not needed, and he can delete it so someone else can use it in the future. That's about it. But hey, I am also a story writer, I would love to hear feedback about my stories too=P --Dirty Me 06:13, 29 March 2016 (UTC)

Sigh, can I ask you something? This isn't against you, but I keep seeing it over and over and over. Can you tell me why women only seem to come in two cup sizes: DD and A-B still developing? It is sort of discouraging for someone like me, who has fully developed breasts, and is not DD, to see that everyone (Yes, not everyone, but it seems like it) on this site seems to think all women are DD, and all other characters are "Still developing". Can you imagine how that makes me feel? Yeah, it is your story, I don't need to read it, etc, but that is not what I am asking. I am asking "Why". Just want to know... --Dirty Me 07:35, 29 March 2016 (UTC)

So what do you think of Dirty Me? Just wondering, since you just discussed how the sex scene can help you imagine it better than the measurements, but the measurements like that are so you can avoid having to go into details about the buildup, climax, and release. --Dirty Me 06:55, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry, I tried to create a guy's version, but honestly, not sure. I guess I could just link to smutty sex romp=P --Dirty Me 07:22, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, believe it or not, I have played Fallout 3 and New Vegas. Yes, I am a girl gamer nerd xD But not 4.

You: I'm ready to start researching the next chapter.
Moria Brown: The second chapter's going to be a bit trickier, I think. It'll cover how to handle creatures out there, for better or for worse.
You: The last task for this chapter is a mole rat study, right?
Moria Brown: I hesitate to ask, but I'll need to examine the sperm from some mole rats. I shouldn't ask, but it is to better know the world we live in now.
You: Why can't you do this research yourself?
Moria Brown: Well, because, I can only think of a couple ways to get sperm from them, and that wouldn't be very pleasant, would it? At least you look like you can really handle yourself out there.
You: So what do I need to do?
Moria Brown: Well, I will give you this pheromone. Now, it should attract attract them and you can figure out how to get the sperm. But I would be careful with it. They will think you are a female mole rat, and might get frisky, if you know what I mean. Do you know what I mean?
You: *Shudder* This bitch is fucking crazy!

This demented fantasy has been brought to you by --Dirty Me 07:13, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

I can try but I have been fairly busy lately, not sure how well I would do. Even my own stories have not gotten attention lately D: --Dirty Me 11:41, 16 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I just installed this game to see what it is and who people are in it. While I am not a fan of rape, given I have been raped, I know many stories on here have that. No worries, the stories on here normally are not triggers for me, so I don't freak out about it. Just noticed though, the beginning of the game, when you are locked in the cryo pods, could have something like that. It is the perfect setup.

"Hurry, she is waking up. Finish before she is completely awake!"

It could even lead in to things like slavery. I mean, FO3 had alot of slavery (I always killed the slavers, hated them...), so the main character could wake in that situation. Not sure if the mutants keep slaves like in FO3, but I know many readers here would enjoy that. And no worries, I am not going to freak out. I do that on my blog, not here. One reason I mentioned it, since many of the "tastes" seem to veer that way on this site. Anyways, it is fun to have a rape fantasy sometimes (btw, it is different for men and women. For men, it is more like "Hey, I have a sex toy that I never need to worry about", while for women, it is more about being so overcome with passion, that they cannot stop themselves, and the second most common is being helpless, which is what these scenarios above are more directed to). Could even have a part of the story line where the sex slave fights back and leads a revolt against the slavers. Or where she is "sold" to someone who cares about her well-being, and nurtures her, and turns against the other slavers for some reason (Another mistreats the character, or he is more of an anti-villian or something, so he joined them for survival but never agreed with what they did, or something) --Dirty Me 04:42, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

Sure. For the intro, I have read over your beginning. But, I do not know how your fallout 4 stats and stuff works. If you would like to go with the first idea, based on the intro, that I mentioned, please help make the appropriate page. I will try to write up the confused (Or just put what I have already wrote:

"Blink blink"

You feel numb.

"Blink blink"

Your eyes cannot focus, but you can feel...something. A weight. Something on top of you.

"Shit man, she is looking at me."

"Well, hurry up before this bitch thaws." You can hear one of the people, sounding like he is right above you. Your body tingles, but not in a good way. Like little pieces of ice pricking your skin. The world starts to become a light blur, rather than a dark blur, and you can feel...something. Down around your pussy. You cannot quite figure out what it is, your body is still so numb.

"I am almost there," you hear someone grunt above you.

"About fucking time man. Everyone else already had their turn, and you take for fucking ever. I want my turn."

"Man, this bitch is so wet." You can't quite make sense of the words. You also cannot make sense of the sensation from your pussy. Warmth. While the rest of you is so cold. The blurs start to turn into shapes. Roundish. Almost...like a person. You can feel your body swaying, and a rubbing against your intimate parts. "Oh yeah!" you head above you, and feel more warmth flood into your private area. The pressure leaves you, and then, new pressure.

This time, you can tell, it is a person. As your body regains its sense of feeling, you understand someone is between your legs. Someone is penetrating your pussy. You can barely feel the thrusts, but you can hear the pants of the person on top of you. You can smell...something...disgusting. Rotten breath, the stink of the person. Your mind puts the pieces together, and you try to scream out. A barely heard gurgle escapes from your throat. You try to move your arms to push him off, and realize you cannot. Like you are paralyzed. Finally, you feel him cum deep inside your pussy. Your stomach feel nauseous, understanding sickening you, what they are doing to you.

"And, that is it. Finally. Man, you fucking suck, she is awake, fucker. Next time, let me go first. She can wake up on you!" You are unceremoniously lifted, then shoved back in the decontamination pod. Your eyes now see clearly, the men here like brutes, savage, wild. Appalling. Someone, obviously female, who looks like a nurse, her face covered.

The door closes across your pod, but across the way, you see your husband, you see the door open. Your hands, finally able to move, beat against the glass, as you see your husband try to cling to your son.

My baby! You try to scream out, but it does no good. Your voice still hasn't recovered. You watch in horror as the gun fires, the savage ripping your son away from your husbands arms. The other pod closing. He comes over, looks in your pod, watching you from the other side of the glass, leering at you. You recoil in horror, realizing this is the last one you saw, the one raping you, and now he has your son. Suddenly, your vision goes misty, and then nothing.

--Dirty Me 05:23, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

Nah, no real reason to create a new one. This could be one of the things that "breaks" the character, or used for other things. Like, "Okay, shit, these people have my son, but there are too many. Fuck... guess I will find another way." Option: Become the gang's fuck toy to get to your son. Something like that. Or, is this from the other characters, not the main character? No one said someone being raped in the beginning will really influence the characters kinkiness level. Just an intro in this case, trying to stay with the opening. It just makes more sense, more so that "Hey, we thawed you, shot your husband, and grabbed your son. Now, lets sex." "Just let me put my heels behind my ears for you!" A way you can get a sexual intro without breaking the real storyline, because lets face it, this idea wouldn't work...it makes no realistic sense. Why would the character suddenly start having random sex, right after being thawed, seeing her husband shot, and her baby taken. But, I also had another thought for you: Clothing damage. One way you can get the characters exposed, without having them just run around exposed for thrills. As your clothes take damage, you start exposing things unless you repair them. I know 4 doesn't really have the whole durability thing, but 3 does, and it would still fit in the lore, even though it might be slightly different from the game itself. I guess I will let you give your thoughts about that. After all, battling a horny deathclaw wouldn't matter if you have clothing damage or not. He will just rip it off and have his way with you anyways (and it probably wouldn't matter if you were male or female for that)... --Dirty Me 05:52, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

Okay, created the page F/200, but you might need to adjust it to match stats and other stuff. Again, I am not sure about that. Also, I did not add options. I guess it should be expanded to the point where you leave the vault, since that is where you actually have choices. Or maybe when you arrive back at your home town. Been trying to figure out how the character would justify the giant mechanical vibrator (aka. your robot butler getting the character off), since, in light of what happens before, I cannot imagine myself suddenly going "Oh, hey mister robot, remember those times when my husband was working late, I was feeling a bit frustrated, and you would turn on that little vibrator of yours? Well, I am back and need some release). Nah, I will need to find something better. --Dirty Me 06:02, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

I finished the F/200 page. I guess I will let you look at figure out what you think. btw, the walkway option will have a nasty surprise (think the clothing damage I mentioned, and being exposed, although I will put the new suit in the next room), while the arc option...I am deciding if that is game over as you get zapped. Thoughts? --Dirty Me 09:02, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

Hey, can you check this template, see what you think to replace your current fallout template? Template:Pipboy2

I don't want to put it directly on your page, or your page will be included in the category for fallout 4 and it will show up here, so you can check that link. If you like it, you can use it by using {{Template:Pipboy2}} --Dirty Me 03:42, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

You can also check M/Go along the walkway to see what this will look like. I have used the pipboy2 template. You can change it to your original pipboy if you do not like it. --Dirty Me 06:04, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

I have added more beginning part. I think I still want the whole "Hey, you arrive for the first time in Sanctuary". I will also do it for male, then relink to your original Sanctuary. btw, I am also asking for contributions to my The Exhibitionist. You can also read the talk page for more info, but would love for more options. I credit everyone who gives options. I turned some of the red links into pages yesterday, and need to work on more red links, but more options means more for me to build going forward. And, options can also be added to pages with non-endings, so the story can continue to build, or just a new path. I guess similar to the way you imagined the fallout shorts. --Dirty Me 06:22, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

Back again? --Dirty Me 06:38, 8 June 2016 (UTC)