The Review/Adult Stories/Dirty Me

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DirtyMeStoryTime's review of Dirty Me:
So, I will admit up front, I am a bit biased about this story, since I wrote it, so you can take this review however you want. I will handle the review a little different here, since I am the author, and explain it.

Dirty Me is a semi-autobiographical work. Many things are taken from my real life experience, then applied with fantasies, what ifs, and sometimes just random stuff.

Dirty me made me laugh, made me cry. It made me want to scream and hit things, and made me break out the sex toys. Most of it is sexual, but it also has real consequences. It tries to mirror real life scenarios.

For the story completeness, it is not very complete. There are 5 main branches, which shows the character as a school girl, a party girl, an exhibitionist, a glory hole girl, or as a public sex toy.

While the story's writing is okay, the large amount of red links make it more linear than it should be. While writing it, I acted out many of the parts to ensure that the writing was authentic. If you aren't sure what that means, it means I used sex toys or my husband to get the right words for how the sex parts of the story flowed.