Assassin

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== Editing Rules ==
== Editing Rules ==
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In this story, the reader should only be able to make choices that the character thinks are logical. She won't just jump to her death just because the reader wants her to! But also, each choice can define the character's personality somehow. For example, if the reader chooses her to make up with a girl, then she already liked girls to begin with. But after that, she can't suddenly stop liking girls in the same branch of the story with no apparent reason. Keep her personality contiguous on each possible path.
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In this story, the reader should only be able to make choices that the character thinks are logical, and each choice will define the character's personality somehow. After the reader makes a choice, the following page will explain ''why'' the character made that choice. If it can't be explained reasonably, that choice shouldn't exist and should be removed or changed into something else. The focus is on consistent narration and interesting options rather than on the number of choices. Keep the link names consistent as well.<br>
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Try to keep up the level of detail in the narration like it is in the existing parts of the story. Also, don't throw in sex into every scene. You know, it can sometimes be even more exciting when you have to wait for it for a while! All in all, the goal is to keep this story at least semi-realistic.
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Naming and page links:
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*'''<nowiki>[[Assassin/Day x - Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki>''' becomes '''Display Name'''
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*'''<nowiki>[[Assassin/Day 1 - Do something|Do something great]]</nowiki>''' becomes '''Do something great'''
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--[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 17:07, 25 February 2010 (UTC)
--[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 17:07, 25 February 2010 (UTC)
== The story begins ==
== The story begins ==
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You are dressed in black — not leather, as it creaks when it bends. This cloth is silent like a shadow, silent like you. It suits your body perfectly, a body that's built for movement. It's the body of a twenty-year-old girl, trained all her life to become an assassin. And even the body itself is perfect — it has to be. If it wasn't, you wouldn't have been chosen. And these people, they can ''afford'' to choose. For those few who call you by a name, you are only known as Whisper. You have Asian origins, but you aren't the resident of any nation. Outside the secret society you live in, you don't exist.
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Black cloth shourds your body — a short, light body that's built for movement and agility. It's the body of a twenty-year-old girl, trained all her life to be an assassin. And it's a perfect body — it has to be. If it wasn't, you wouldn't have been chosen. And these people, they can ''afford'' to choose.
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You keep a very good care of your body — not just by knowing what to eat and how to exercise, but you also spend hours in front of your wall of mirrors, examining how your muscles bend and what shape they take, giving you perfect awareness of yourself when sneaking around in the shadows.
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Your voice is charming and mysterious, but you barely use it at all. For those few who have the honor of calling you by a name, you are only known as Whisper. You have Asian origins, but you aren't the resident of any nation. In addition to your comprehensive knowledge of English, you understand a lot of different languages.
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There's no hair anywhere on you and even your head is bald. You've been through a treatment that prevents it from ever growing at all. It makes you look a bit strange when you're naked, but then again, not many people ever see you even just with your mask off.
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You keep a very good care of your body, and not just by knowing what to eat and how to exercise. You also spend hours naked in front of your screen of mirrors examining how your muscles bend and what shape they take. It gives you perfect awareness of yourself when sneaking around in the shadows. Wearing your tight clothes, your 30B breasts don't bounce at all when you move.
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Your mouth is small but your lips are thick, with red lipstick on them that protects them against dryness. Your eyes are brown and narrow with rather long, dark eyelashes, but you have no eyebrows at all. Your face is rather round with high cheekbones, but gets narrower towards your small chin. Your breasts are a perfect B-cup, but under your tight clothes they don't bounce much when you move. The nipples are dark red, almost brown in contrast to your pale skin, and your labia have a slight hint of the same darker shade.
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There's no hair anywhere on you, as you've been through a treatment that prevents it from ever growing at all. Even your head is bald, which makes your face a bit strange, but then again, not many people ever see you without your mask.
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You've been trained to use all kinds of equipment, but you're deadly even with your bare hands. Quite often you travel and move carrying nothing but your clothes on you, so you achieve the best possible mobility and flexibility. If you know enough about a mission beforehand, you might choose to carry a throwing knife, silenced pistol, blowgun with poison darts or whatever is ideal at each time.
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Your mouth is small but your lips are thick, with red lipstick on them that protects them against dryness. Your eyes are brown and narrow with rather long, dark eyelashes, but you have no eyebrows at all. Your face is rather round with high cheekbones, but gets narrower towards your small chin.
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You've been trained to use all kinds of equipment, but you're deadly even with your bare hands. Quite often you travel and move carrying nothing but your clothes on you, so you achieve the best possible mobility and flexibility. If you know enough about a mission in advance, you might choose to carry a throwing knife, silenced pistol, blowgun with poison darts or whatever is ideal at each time.
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Now is the time for your final challenge, the test to end your apprenticeship and become a full member of the Society of Assassins, which has been a secret for centuries — and so it still remains in the year of 2010. Like every assassin knows, the biggest part of an operation is the planning and preparation, and only a fraction of it lies in its execution. But this time will be different. This time, you'll be sent on a mission with no background knowledge of anything about it, only the description of your target. But you know you can do it. You are just that awesome.
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You are a member of the Society of Assassins, which has been a secret for centuries — and so it still remains in the year of 2010. You are now in your room, in a tall skyscraper in New York City, shrouded in your tight black outfit. It's the middle of the night — the time to start your day.
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You are in your room, in a tall skyscraper in New York City, shrouded in your tight black outfit, as prepared to your test as possible. It's the middle of the night and you have been summoned to the helipad on the roof.
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*[[Assassin/Day 1 - Examine your body|''Examine your body'']]
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*[[Assassin/Day 1 - Go rogue|Abandon the society]]
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*[[Assassin/Day 1 - Stay in the society|Stay in the society]]
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*[[Assassin/Day 1 - Proceed with the mission|Proceed with the mission]] (stub)
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'''Tip:''' Options in ''italics'' are additional reading that don't branch out the story. They are there just for fun if you like that kind of things.
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*[[Assassin/Day 1 - Go rogue|Abandon the society and go rogue]]
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*[[Assassin/Day 1 - You are not ready|You're not ready for this]] (continue your training)
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[[Category: Assassin]]
[[Category: Assassin]]

Current revision as of 22:16, 15 September 2010

Work in progress — Do not edit!

Editing Rules

In this story, the reader should only be able to make choices that the character thinks are logical, and each choice will define the character's personality somehow. After the reader makes a choice, the following page will explain why the character made that choice. If it can't be explained reasonably, that choice shouldn't exist and should be removed or changed into something else. The focus is on consistent narration and interesting options rather than on the number of choices. Keep the link names consistent as well.
--Dreama 17:07, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

The story begins

Black cloth shourds your body — a short, light body that's built for movement and agility. It's the body of a twenty-year-old girl, trained all her life to be an assassin. And it's a perfect body — it has to be. If it wasn't, you wouldn't have been chosen. And these people, they can afford to choose.

Your voice is charming and mysterious, but you barely use it at all. For those few who have the honor of calling you by a name, you are only known as Whisper. You have Asian origins, but you aren't the resident of any nation. In addition to your comprehensive knowledge of English, you understand a lot of different languages.

You keep a very good care of your body, and not just by knowing what to eat and how to exercise. You also spend hours naked in front of your screen of mirrors examining how your muscles bend and what shape they take. It gives you perfect awareness of yourself when sneaking around in the shadows. Wearing your tight clothes, your 30B breasts don't bounce at all when you move.

There's no hair anywhere on you, as you've been through a treatment that prevents it from ever growing at all. Even your head is bald, which makes your face a bit strange, but then again, not many people ever see you without your mask.

Your mouth is small but your lips are thick, with red lipstick on them that protects them against dryness. Your eyes are brown and narrow with rather long, dark eyelashes, but you have no eyebrows at all. Your face is rather round with high cheekbones, but gets narrower towards your small chin.

You've been trained to use all kinds of equipment, but you're deadly even with your bare hands. Quite often you travel and move carrying nothing but your clothes on you, so you achieve the best possible mobility and flexibility. If you know enough about a mission in advance, you might choose to carry a throwing knife, silenced pistol, blowgun with poison darts or whatever is ideal at each time.

You are a member of the Society of Assassins, which has been a secret for centuries — and so it still remains in the year of 2010. You are now in your room, in a tall skyscraper in New York City, shrouded in your tight black outfit. It's the middle of the night — the time to start your day.

Tip: Options in italics are additional reading that don't branch out the story. They are there just for fun if you like that kind of things.

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