Crime Scene

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CRIME SCENE Spotlight on a dead body. Lights up and a crime scene is unfolding. Cops unrolling yellow tape, a chalk outline being drawn, photos being taken, evidence bagged, several detectives are investigating.

Detective Jimmy is outlinig the body in chalk

Detective Sanchez is taking pictures

Forensic Detective is taking notes

Patrolman is calling it in

PATROLMAN

Looks like it's a homocide. Someone definitely push her off the roof.

DETECTIVE JIMMY

It really makes it so difficult to chalk her when her brains are splattered all the way across the street.

DECTECTIVE SANCHEZ

Not only that, but it looks like the perp had his way here right before he pushed her over off the roof.

FORENSIC DETECTIVE

Twenty three years on the beat and I don't think I'll ever get used to this. Well, what are gonna do?


The Captain enters.


CAPTAIN

Hey guys. I brought doughnuts. Jimmy, I'm sorry. They were out of Boston Creme.

JIMMY

What? Nooo!!! Sonova bitch!

DECTECTIVE 4

Hey look at this. Looks like he slit her neck just before he tossed her off the roof.

CAPTAIN

Yup, typical modis opperendi of this kind of rapist slash killer. Hey did any of you catch the Pistons Nicks game last night?

                       DETECTIVE 1 

No, I was pulling a double last night. How'd we do?

CAPTAIN

We lost. Pistons kicked our ass 102 to 135.

DECTECTIVE 4

No, No! Why? How could this happen?

DETECTIVE 3

Check this out. This sicko carved a pentogram into her forehead.

JIMMY

Wonder if he did that before or after he raped her.

CAPTAIN

Hey by the way, Sanchez, I spoke to the Cheif and unfortunatelly I can't give you off Friday.

SANCHEZ

C'mon that's bullshit! I put in for that weeks ago! Why? Whyyyyyy? (throws up)

JIMMY

Easy, Sanchez. We still need to get some more pictures.

Sanchez start to photograph the body but the camera gets jammed.

SANCHEZ

Jesus effin Christ! Why? Why now. Not my camera!

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