Crime Scene
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CRIME SCENE | CRIME SCENE | ||
| + | Spotlight on a dead body. Lights up and a crime scene is unfolding. Cops unrolling yellow tape, a chalk outline being drawn, photos being taken, evidence bagged, several detectives are investigating. | ||
| - | + | Detective Jimmy is outlinig the body in chalk | |
| - | Detective | + | Detective Sanchez is taking pictures |
| - | Detective | + | Forensic Detective is taking notes |
| - | + | Patrolman is calling it in | |
| - | + | PATROLMAN | |
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| + | Looks like it's a homocide. Someone definitely push her off the roof. | ||
| - | + | DETECTIVE JIMMY | |
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| + | It really makes it so difficult to chalk her when her brains are splattered all the way across the street. | ||
| - | + | DECTECTIVE SANCHEZ | |
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| + | Not only that, but it looks like the perp had his way here right before he pushed her over off the roof. | ||
| - | + | FORENSIC DETECTIVE | |
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| + | Twenty three years on the beat and I don't think I'll ever get used to this. Well, what are gonna do? | ||
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The Captain enters. | The Captain enters. | ||
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CAPTAIN | CAPTAIN | ||
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Hey guys. I brought doughnuts. Jimmy, I'm sorry. They were out of Boston Creme. | Hey guys. I brought doughnuts. Jimmy, I'm sorry. They were out of Boston Creme. | ||
JIMMY | JIMMY | ||
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What? Nooo!!! Sonova bitch! | What? Nooo!!! Sonova bitch! | ||
DECTECTIVE 4 | DECTECTIVE 4 | ||
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Hey look at this. Looks like he slit her neck just before he tossed her off the roof. | Hey look at this. Looks like he slit her neck just before he tossed her off the roof. | ||
CAPTAIN | CAPTAIN | ||
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Yup, typical modis opperendi of this kind of rapist slash killer. Hey did any of you catch the Pistons Nicks game last night? | Yup, typical modis opperendi of this kind of rapist slash killer. Hey did any of you catch the Pistons Nicks game last night? | ||
| - | DETECTIVE 1 | + | |
| - | No, I was pulling a double last night. How'd we do? | + | DETECTIVE 1 |
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| + | No, I was pulling a double last night. How'd we do? | ||
CAPTAIN | CAPTAIN | ||
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We lost. Pistons kicked our ass 102 to 135. | We lost. Pistons kicked our ass 102 to 135. | ||
DECTECTIVE 4 | DECTECTIVE 4 | ||
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No, No! Why? How could this happen? | No, No! Why? How could this happen? | ||
DETECTIVE 3 | DETECTIVE 3 | ||
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Check this out. This sicko carved a pentogram into her forehead. | Check this out. This sicko carved a pentogram into her forehead. | ||
JIMMY | JIMMY | ||
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Wonder if he did that before or after he raped her. | Wonder if he did that before or after he raped her. | ||
CAPTAIN | CAPTAIN | ||
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Hey by the way, Sanchez, I spoke to the Cheif and unfortunatelly I can't give you off Friday. | Hey by the way, Sanchez, I spoke to the Cheif and unfortunatelly I can't give you off Friday. | ||
SANCHEZ | SANCHEZ | ||
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C'mon that's bullshit! I put in for that weeks ago! Why? Whyyyyyy? | C'mon that's bullshit! I put in for that weeks ago! Why? Whyyyyyy? | ||
(throws up) | (throws up) | ||
JIMMY | JIMMY | ||
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Easy, Sanchez. We still need to get some more pictures. | Easy, Sanchez. We still need to get some more pictures. | ||
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SANCHEZ | SANCHEZ | ||
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Jesus effin Christ! Why? Why now. Not my camera! | Jesus effin Christ! Why? Why now. Not my camera! | ||
Revision as of 07:45, 27 March 2006
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CRIME SCENE
Spotlight on a dead body. Lights up and a crime scene is unfolding. Cops unrolling yellow tape, a chalk outline being drawn, photos being taken, evidence bagged, several detectives are investigating.
Detective Jimmy is outlinig the body in chalk
Detective Sanchez is taking pictures
Forensic Detective is taking notes
Patrolman is calling it in
PATROLMAN
Looks like it's a homocide. Someone definitely push her off the roof.
DETECTIVE JIMMY
It really makes it so difficult to chalk her when her brains are splattered all the way across the street.
DECTECTIVE SANCHEZ
Not only that, but it looks like the perp had his way here right before he pushed her over off the roof.
FORENSIC DETECTIVE
Twenty three years on the beat and I don't think I'll ever get used to this. Well, what are gonna do?
The Captain enters.
CAPTAIN
Hey guys. I brought doughnuts. Jimmy, I'm sorry. They were out of Boston Creme.
JIMMY
What? Nooo!!! Sonova bitch!
DECTECTIVE 4
Hey look at this. Looks like he slit her neck just before he tossed her off the roof.
CAPTAIN
Yup, typical modis opperendi of this kind of rapist slash killer. Hey did any of you catch the Pistons Nicks game last night?
DETECTIVE 1
No, I was pulling a double last night. How'd we do?
CAPTAIN
We lost. Pistons kicked our ass 102 to 135.
DECTECTIVE 4
No, No! Why? How could this happen?
DETECTIVE 3
Check this out. This sicko carved a pentogram into her forehead.
JIMMY
Wonder if he did that before or after he raped her.
CAPTAIN
Hey by the way, Sanchez, I spoke to the Cheif and unfortunatelly I can't give you off Friday.
SANCHEZ
C'mon that's bullshit! I put in for that weeks ago! Why? Whyyyyyy? (throws up)
JIMMY
Easy, Sanchez. We still need to get some more pictures.
Sanchez start to photograph the body but the camera gets jammed.
SANCHEZ
Jesus effin Christ! Why? Why now. Not my camera!
