Talk:Scene 1-01-1: Good morning

From Drunkenmurder

If anyone wants to revise this, please do so. From what it looks now, it will need expansion and improvement.

Handle is Boldfaced because....

I don't know what you actually call those metal handles where you hang the towels, so if it neds to be replaced, please do.

Both towel handle and towel rack seem to be correct. VDZ 12:44, 12 May 2009 (PDT)

Hmm a revision from Yellowike!

It's cool and all, but you really should have said something that you did something. Now look, I've only realized this happened months after...

Anyway, I think the latter part of yours feels solid, but I hope you don't mind a few tweaks. The opening feels rather weak, though. Maybe we can shift the first few lines to the previous ones?