User talk:Dwyn

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I recommend you read the Tutorial, then go fix the page you made :o

Otherwise, the admin will give you a warning, and after 3 of them, you get banned xD --Dirty Me 08:57, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

I have two suggestions. First, I'm seeing a lot of small changes being made very quickly. I suggest using the Show Preview button so you can see what it's going to look like before you save the page. Make sure everything's in order before saving. Obviously it's okay to make mistakes and correct them, or to change your mind about something, but you've just been editing the same page over and over and it seems like you're hitting save to see what it looks like then making an edit, or something along those lines. I apologize if this isn't the case.

Second, it's entirely up to you of course, but I would avoid that specific blue color for narration because it makes it look like the text is clickable. You can use hex codes for font colors. I use them in my stories to different ends, like differentiating characters in a chatroom. Again, it's entirely up to you but I figured I'd mention it. I thout the bit of blue text on your first page was clickable myself. --In The Worst Ways 18:53, 24 May 2016 (UTC)