User talk:AvengerOstrich

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If you're going to post in one of my stories, please try to use proper grammar and punctuation. Pay attention to your verb tenses. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue. --Platypus 21:14, 2 September 2017 (UTC)

I'm still figuring out how this place works. I hope you see this. I am very sorry about my mistakes in your story; I'll try to be more careful in the future. If you can take the time to read what I've added, it would mean a lot if you could tell me the situations I've described are in line about what you would expect out of your story, in both quality of the content and the content itself. AvengerOstrich

While your plot concepts are good and fit the story well, your mechanics are lacking. Your grammar is very good for a non-native English writer, but not up to the standards I want to see in my story. Please, contribute to a story by someone with lower standards, or even start your own story. --Platypus 05:56, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Hello, I see Platypus talked to you. If you wish to practice grammer, see the Magikarp Tutorial, where nearly anything can be added... as long as a 10 year old can read it. (No excessive swearing, no sex, et cetera). I can also help you write by you writing a page, and me making the grammer better. --Magikarp7297 06:57, 12 July 2018 (UTC)