The Review/Mature Stories/Escape from Syria
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Many paths end in death, and there is some sexual content. Some graphic violence. Rape, torture. | Many paths end in death, and there is some sexual content. Some graphic violence. Rape, torture. | ||
| + | Follows grammatical rules. Has one noted inconsistency in [[Knock the thug out again]], where the author tries to flash the main character's panties while the beginning of the story shows she is clearly wearing black pants. | ||
[[Category:The Review|Escape from Syria]] | [[Category:The Review|Escape from Syria]] | ||
[[Category:The Review - Mature Stories|Escape from Syria]] | [[Category:The Review - Mature Stories|Escape from Syria]] | ||
Revision as of 03:45, 20 June 2016
DirtyMeStoryTime's review of Escape from Syria:
You are a secret agent for the CIA, driven to this path by the death of your parents.
The status bar is used, but not effectively. An edit of the story might be better removing it, since it seems to have no purpose.
Many paths end in death, and there is some sexual content. Some graphic violence. Rape, torture.
Follows grammatical rules. Has one noted inconsistency in Knock the thug out again, where the author tries to flash the main character's panties while the beginning of the story shows she is clearly wearing black pants.
