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Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to Cassie's Horrible Family. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

Thanks for adding to The World As We Know It. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on 2 Taboo 4 You and Chronos after I have the basics for Arcade Adventure all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for Primal Influence which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --Elerneron 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Hey thanks for your contributions to 2 Taboo 4 You. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --Elerneron

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --Elerneron 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for 2 Taboo 4 You a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --Elerneron 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014

Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp

Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp

well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

hailey

Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- Cpt. Devonin

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --Platypus 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should Anime School be overall? Forget the sex stuff, should it be a slice-of-life, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, a thriller? And what kind of sub-genre should it be, if it is a sub-genre like Gothic Horror or Psychological Thriller?

2. Should each character have their own genres and, if so, which genre for which one?

3. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Boarding or public?

4. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

5. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot or are they just...smaller? Could they introduce a genre shift like from Drama to Horror if we chose Drama as the overall genre?

6. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like each subject? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

7. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

8. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school? Maybe even outside the country?

9. Is there anything special about the school? Any events that could conjure up potential stories? Maybe the school has some mythology around it, some myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

10. Are sex scenes or explicit sexual descriptions really necessary in a Adult CYOS? (O.K, not a important question for the story but it still stands.)

11. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a super-competent fighter too? Sia is shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also shy but who says that he can't be a great rock guitarist too? Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. (Hell, I'm almost glad that this CYOA has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or berry.)

(Sites below to help with characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--User:Fredhot16 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Getting rid of the Riko x Suzaku sex scenes. No buildup, unrealistic, and, quite frankly, unnecessary. Update: apparently, a certain egg-laying mammal that people think doesn't do much but is actually a secret agent disapproves of this. Fuck. Well, O.K. I'm still changing this, it's still garbage. Update: glad you got a laugh. But the things I asked, though?--User:Fredhot16 07:42, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Seeing from your recent edits, you're going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. Not a bad idea, just seems...kinda typical for a school centered anime. Maybe some crossing with another genre? Just wish, you know, more stuff happened before we got to the kiss. Buildup is vital. Also, mind changing that part where Kenji gets nearly raped anally? That's...no, just, no. Kinda stupid of the guy too. Also, Kenji...maybe instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his rep", you could, you know, make him a tough guy that EMBRACES his heart of gold? No hiding it, no stupid lies, no ridiculous disguises, he OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage? If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a smack down. --User:Fredhot16 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--User:Fredhot16 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-User:Fredhot16 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, I have an idea. For each character, there should be a prologue that takes place during their first day at or returning to school and let the choices from there effect the next chapter. Also, what story arcs will there be in "Anime School"? You know, what will happen in the general story and not just in each person's story?--User:Fredhot16 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. Just letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also damn tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of Kyōgi Rikon so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a pretty fierce scrapper. She doesn't enjoy fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different mindset then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--User:Fredhot16 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--User:Fredhot16 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian". Whoops for whoever came up with that. I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--User:Fredhot16 13:28,17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--User:Fredhot16 18:23,21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, would you object to a Halloween episode someday in the CYOS? Or a detective episode?--User:Fredhot16 22:58,22 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Fredhot16

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--User:Fredhot16 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --User:Fredhot16 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--User:Fredhot16 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--User:Fredhot16 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--User:Fredhot16 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --User:Fredhot16 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --User:Fredhot16 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--User:Fredhot16 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --User:Fredhot16 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

All glory.--Fredhot16 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking gift-wrapped for character development which would have elevated the character above the THOUSANDS of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --Fredhot16 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. Fuckin' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --Fredhot16 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and anyplaces that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill everything to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--Fredhot16 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking centuries. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--Fredhot16 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--Fredhot16 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually change them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--Fredhot16 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --Fredhot16 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like real tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --Fredhot16 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --Fredhot16 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--Fredhot16 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--Fredhot16 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---Fredhot16 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---Fredhot16 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--Fredhot16 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--Fredhot16 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--Fredhot16 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...(drumroll) not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--Fredhot16 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--User:Fredhot16 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--User:Fredhot16 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--User:Fredhot16 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---Fredhot16 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or anything to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---Fredhot16 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---Fredhot16 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

High School?

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --Robin

Okey dokey!

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --Robin

Gotcha!

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --Robin

Thanks?

While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to Ty's Story. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

Nice job

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --Orpheus 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

Supershifter

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

Avast!

I appreciate your help for the Avast! story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that I wouldn't have written it this way. -- -Sentinel-, 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

PAGNM

Thank you for your addition to PAGNM. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --Cannon 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Thank You

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

Alien Adventure

Thank you for your additions to Alien Adventure. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --Cannon 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

Metropolis Power Plant

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the Metropolis Power Plant and Parasite's Hideout. It completely slipped my mind. Also, your addition, "Try to wear Livewire out," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --Cannon 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

"Megan" addition

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --TheElderOnes 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

War Pigs

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --AgentVincent 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

Re:

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --AgentVincent

MOTDE

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies. The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--Fletcher Peninsula

Dankeschön

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now. But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --TheElderOnes 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, someone enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --TheElderOnes 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

Re: Mind Reading?

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --AgentVincent 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--AgentVincent

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. AgentVincent 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

Remember

Do not touch my story!.....

Only joking. Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --Heyoeveryone 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: R: Try to piss him off. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

At least three lines of dialogue
Limit the swearing to only low amounts
Have the choices: R: Smash the Walkie Talkie and R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"
Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. Spoiler: Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. End Spoilers. I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

More Avast!

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to Avast! -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added here. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans^TM for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping -Sentinel- will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. JackalRobot 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

2nd person

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --Platypus 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a little chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --Platypus 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --Platypus 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but with restraint

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience --Liger0sch

Smutty Sex Romp

I agree that the Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

Did I do this right?

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

About my story

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

Not that I'm forcing you to

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

I need to know something else also

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *Wedre2

Thanks

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

Re: F.R. Theory

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the Explanations page I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~Bekahllama 17:20 EST 28 November 2012

Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~Bekahllama 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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Pedobear12 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read. Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that. Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12 I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face. I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create. I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

Pedobear12 - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --Mokarran 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

Dirty Me's sextion

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --Dirty Me 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --Dirty Me 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --Dirty Me 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --Dirty Me 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --Dirty Me 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --Dirty Me 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --Dirty Me 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --Dirty Me 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have Dirty Me more complete, with a different style of story. The Prank War is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --Dirty Me 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --Dirty Me 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --Dirty Me 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --Dirty Me 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --Dirty Me 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --Dirty Me 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --Dirty Me 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--Dirty Me 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --Dirty Me 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: The Exibitionist. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --Dirty Me 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --Dirty Me 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --Dirty Me 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of Dirty Me. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --Dirty Me 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at The Exhibitionist. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --Dirty Me 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. *huggles* --Dirty Me 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --Dirty Me 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --Dirty Me 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --Dirty Me 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --Dirty Me 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, Too Graphic doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:

You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.

You look around, and notice the door opening.

I step in, looking you up and down.

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.

"I think I have an idea."

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.

"Seems like you like this."

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.

"Not too bad," I whisper.

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.

"Now where to put them."

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.

"Yes, that feels good."

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.

"So, you like this?"

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.

"Can you see me?"

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.

"Hmm, such a bad boy."

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.

"Ohh yes!"

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.

"Ohh, it feels good!"

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.

"Ohhhh god yes!"

I climax, rolling over next to you.

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --Dirty Me 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --Dirty Me 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on DirtyMeStoryTime Rants. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at Smutty Sex Romp at some point=P --Dirty Me 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --Dirty Me 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --Dirty Me 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --Dirty Me 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --Dirty Me 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating DirtyMeStoryTime Rants. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --Dirty Me 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. The Sexual Adventures of You, the Your younger brother Bobby path. --Dirty Me 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --Dirty Me 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --Dirty Me 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:

Marriage and infidelity
Societies judgments
Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --Dirty Me 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in The Exhibitionist, and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --Dirty Me 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --Dirty Me 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --Dirty Me 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --Dirty Me 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --Dirty Me 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: *cry*

btw, what do you think of my It's programming time!? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --Dirty Me 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --Dirty Me 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --Dirty Me 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --Dirty Me 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --Dirty Me 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --Dirty Me 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my Context story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --Dirty Me 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --Dirty Me 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --Dirty Me 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --Dirty Me 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --Dirty Me 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --Dirty Me 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the Wasteland Survival Guide. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --Dirty Me 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --Dirty Me 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --Dirty Me 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --Dirty Me 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in The Review Guide, because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --Dirty Me 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, A Big Ugly Story. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --Dirty Me 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --Dirty Me 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --Dirty Me 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --Dirty Me 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --Dirty Me 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Congrats on the new house! Hope it is better than the old one =D

--Dirty Me 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --Dirty Me 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like

Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --Dirty Me 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --Dirty Me 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --Dirty Me 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --Dirty Me 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --Dirty Me 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --Dirty Me 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --Dirty Me 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --Dirty Me 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --Dirty Me 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --Dirty Me 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --Dirty Me 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Dirty Me's new sextion

Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip and hit edit? Inside, you will find the . Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --Dirty Me 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --Dirty Me 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --Dirty Me 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --Dirty Me 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --Dirty Me 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --Dirty Me 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --Dirty Me 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? Masochist me? --Dirty Me 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose Rape Magnet. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --Dirty Me 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in Masochist me. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --Dirty Me 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --Dirty Me 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --Dirty Me 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --Dirty Me 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --Dirty Me 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --Dirty Me 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --Dirty Me 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: Masochist me/Sex training

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --Dirty Me 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --Dirty Me 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --Dirty Me 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --Dirty Me 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --Dirty Me 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --Dirty Me 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --Dirty Me 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,
Mental breakdowns,
Menstrual cramps,
Menopause...
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:
If guys had their periods
They would have compare the size of their tampons

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face
Bless his hair that tends to curl
Keep him safe from all the girls
Bless his arms that are so strong
Keep his hands where they belong
Bless his dick, the one I sucked
Bless the bed, in which we fucked
And if my mom happened to walk in
Bless the shit I'd be in

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --Dirty Me 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --Dirty Me 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --Dirty Me 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --Dirty Me 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --Dirty Me 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --Dirty Me 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --Dirty Me 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --Dirty Me 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --Dirty Me 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --Dirty Me 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

Blackadder38's messages

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-Blackadder38

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

Editing on 2T4U

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) user: Jemini

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) User:Jemini

On "Morning After"...

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -Sir Blahtson

Hi

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. Wannabe rockstar 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

Hey!

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. AgentVincent 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

Leaving

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. In The Worst Ways 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. In The Worst Ways 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. In The Worst Ways 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v In The Worst Ways 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--Poopyhead 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)