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Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should Anime School be overall? Forget the sex stuff, should it be a slice-of-life, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, a thriller? And what kind of sub-genre should it be, if it is a sub-genre like Gothic Horror or Psychological Thriller?

2. Should each character have their own genres and, if so, which genre for which one?

3. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Boarding or public?

4. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

5. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot or are they just...smaller? Could they introduce a genre shift like from Drama to Horror if we chose Drama as the overall genre?

6. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like each subject? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

7. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

8. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school? Maybe even outside the country?

9. Is there anything special about the school? Any events that could conjure up potential stories? Maybe the school has some mythology around it, some myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future?

10. Are sex scenes or explicit sexual descriptions really necessary in a Adult CYOS? (O.K, not a important question for the story but it still stands.)

11. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a super-competent fighter too? Sia is shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also shy but who says that he can't be a great rock guitarist too? Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. (Hell, I'm almost glad that this CYOA has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or berry.)

(Sites below to help with characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters --User:Fredhot16 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Fredhot16

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--User:Fredhot16 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --User:Fredhot16 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--User:Fredhot16 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--User:Fredhot16 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--User:Fredhot16 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --User:Fredhot16 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Top section

Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to Cassie's Horrible Family. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

Thanks for adding to The World As We Know It. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on 2 Taboo 4 You and Chronos after I have the basics for Arcade Adventure all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for Primal Influence which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --Elerneron 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Hey thanks for your contributions to 2 Taboo 4 You. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --Elerneron

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --Elerneron 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for 2 Taboo 4 You a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --Elerneron 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014

Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp

Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp

well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

hailey

Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- Cpt. Devonin

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --Platypus 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

High School?

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --Robin

Okey dokey!

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --Robin

Gotcha!

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --Robin

Thanks?

While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to Ty's Story. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

Nice job

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --Orpheus 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

Supershifter

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

Avast!

I appreciate your help for the Avast! story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that I wouldn't have written it this way. -- -Sentinel-, 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

PAGNM

Thank you for your addition to PAGNM. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --Cannon 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Thank You

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

Alien Adventure

Thank you for your additions to Alien Adventure. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --Cannon 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

Metropolis Power Plant

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the Metropolis Power Plant and Parasite's Hideout. It completely slipped my mind. Also, your addition, "Try to wear Livewire out," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --Cannon 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

"Megan" addition

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --TheElderOnes 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

War Pigs

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --AgentVincent 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

Re:

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --AgentVincent

MOTDE

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies. The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

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Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--Fletcher Peninsula

Dankeschön

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now. But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --TheElderOnes 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, someone enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --TheElderOnes 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

Re: Mind Reading?

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --AgentVincent 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--AgentVincent

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. AgentVincent 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

Remember

Do not touch my story!.....

Only joking. Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --Heyoeveryone 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: R: Try to piss him off. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

• At least three lines of dialogue
• Limit the swearing to only low amounts
• Have the choices: R: Smash the Walkie Talkie and R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"
• Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. Spoiler: Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. End Spoilers. I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

More Avast!

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to Avast! -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added here. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans^TM for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping -Sentinel- will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. JackalRobot 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

2nd person

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --Platypus 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a little chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --Platypus 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --Platypus 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but with restraint

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience --Liger0sch

Smutty Sex Romp

I agree that the Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

Did I do this right?

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

About my story

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

Not that I'm forcing you to

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

I need to know something else also

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *Wedre2

Thanks

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

Re: F.R. Theory

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the Explanations page I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~Bekahllama 17:20 EST 28 November 2012

Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~Bekahllama 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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Pedobear12 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read. Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that. Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12 I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face. I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create. I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line  :)

Pedobear12 - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --Mokarran 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

Dirty Me's sextion

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --Dirty Me 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --Dirty Me 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --Dirty Me 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --Dirty Me 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --Dirty Me 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --Dirty Me 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --Dirty Me 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --Dirty Me 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have Dirty Me more complete, with a different style of story. The Prank War is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --Dirty Me 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --Dirty Me 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --Dirty Me 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --Dirty Me 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --Dirty Me 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --Dirty Me 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --Dirty Me 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--Dirty Me 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --Dirty Me 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: The Exibitionist. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --Dirty Me 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --Dirty Me 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --Dirty Me 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of Dirty Me. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --Dirty Me 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at The Exhibitionist. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --Dirty Me 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. *huggles* --Dirty Me 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --Dirty Me 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --Dirty Me 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --Dirty Me 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --Dirty Me 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, Too Graphic doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:

You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.

You look around, and notice the door opening.

I step in, looking you up and down.

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.

"I think I have an idea."

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.

"Seems like you like this."

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.

"Not too bad," I whisper.

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.

"Now where to put them."

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.

"Yes, that feels good."

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.

"So, you like this?"

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.

"Can you see me?"

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.

"Hmm, such a bad boy."

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.

"Ohh yes!"

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.

"Ohh, it feels good!"

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.

"Ohhhh god yes!"

I climax, rolling over next to you.

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --Dirty Me 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --Dirty Me 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on DirtyMeStoryTime Rants. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at Smutty Sex Romp at some point=P --Dirty Me 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --Dirty Me 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --Dirty Me 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --Dirty Me 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --Dirty Me 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Blackadder38's messages

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-Blackadder38

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

Editing on 2T4U

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) user: Jemini

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) User:Jemini

On "Morning After"...

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -Sir Blahtson

Hi

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. Wannabe rockstar 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

Hey!

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. AgentVincent 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

Leaving

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. In The Worst Ways 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. In The Worst Ways 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. In The Worst Ways 4:50am est 5/5/16