User talk:Shirasade
From Create Your Own Story
Using colons as dialogue connectors should be the exception, not the rule. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue. --Platypus 14:05, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
Can you please get over your obsession with colons? That isn't how normal people write dialogue. --Platypus 16:59, 20 February 2016 (UTC)
Other than the colon thing, your English is better than many native speakers or writers. --Platypus 19:47, 20 February 2016 (UTC)