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Hello there!

I saw your message and I would love the idea of another editor. As I say, I am only interested in people that have a decent grasp of proper grammar, but I'm sure that you're perfectly capable! I haven't abandoned it, I've just been... misplaced by the current situation (I'm sure you know what I mean) and whatever free time that I have and have spent on this, I've been planning. I only have a few conditions for you editing this story:

1. You, of course, maintain a proper level of grammar throughout the entire story. 2. I'm sure by the way you phrased the message that you've seen the way I laid out my Chronos Colony Handbook. I would like you to reference this exactly as you see it. 3. You at least basically follow the storyline of Lucy. Their storylines intertwine at certain points - so don't go too far ahead.

If you're happy with this, please message me back - I'd love your input!

Please excuse me if I don't respond right away: I live in England (times zones :( right?) and even then I have other important business to attend to. I hope to see you soon.

-TheFreddyFazbear54 13th January 2021 23:20 UTC

Explanation

Hello there!

Just to clear up some things:

1. The Chronos Colony Handbook will be updated and will be an integral part to progressing through the story. When I say exactly, I mean that I would like the HTML recreated as you see in the source code - with the lines and all. This is just there for that purpose or if the reader just wants to know about the history.

2. When I put this amount of choices, I just want to create, as you said, the illusion of choice without actually putting a choice. I would never put so many paths in a story unless they have been extensively planned beforehand.

3. I won't be updating the story all the time due to the fact that I am very busy. But when I do (this will probably be on weekends), I will be writing quite a lot.

4. I don't mind you calling me 'Crazy Brit', but if you wish, please do call me Freddy. That's not my real name but it's fitting.

Kind regards,

-TheFreddyFazbear54 14th January 2021 23:23 UTC