Edgar Khoul

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Basic information
Homeworld Dorin
Physical description
Species Kel Dor
Gender Male
Age 14
Height 6 ft
Hair color no hair
Eye color Unknown
Cybernetics None
Chronological and political information
Era(s)
  • Rise of the Empire era
  • New Republic era
  • New Jedi Order era
Affiliation
  • The Order
  • New Republic
  • Galactic Federation of Free Alliances
Rank Jedi Padawan
Caste Consular
Known masters
Known apprentices
  • N/A
Other information
Weapon Double Dragon Lightsaber
Ship N/A


" The Emotions must not control the actions"
- Master Therein

Edgar Khoul is a male Kel Dor from the planet of Dorin who became a Jedi Padawan of The {J}edi Order. An apprentice to Jedi Consular Therein,a member of the council and one of the best jedis ever , he is learning the ways of the force .

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Biography

Early Life

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Edgar Khoul was born on Dorin , a dark and dusty planet , the homeworld of the Kel Dors . His father was Sacks Khoul , a locan merchant and a supporter of the tradition of Baran Do .As a child Edgar had simple life - breakfast , field ,lunch , field , dinner . He was disobient child witch liked breaking rules and making practical jokes .But one day , Edgar's life changed complitely .As he was warking in the field , some strange soldiers came and took him with them . Edgar was screaming to his father fo help , but his father did not do anything . The soldiers took Edgar to the Hall of Baran Do Sages , where his training begun. Since that moment Edgar has never seen his parents again .

Baran Do Sages

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The Kel Dor species has a long and proud Force Tradition known as the Baran Do Sages. For thousands of years before joining the Galactic Republic, the Baran Do acted as advisors and seers for the leaders of the Kel Dor.On Dorin the elders senced the force in the youngsters and trained them in the ways of the force .But the elders were not peace keepers , they used the force for making and winning wars . That was why the elders did not trust the jedis.As youngster Edgar became apprentice of Konto Ohaar . He gave him basic knowledge about the Force - how to use the Force for making predictions and pushing and pulling things. Master Konto Ohaar thaught Edgar how to control his emotions and clear his mind , how to behave .But the most valuable teaching that Edgar learnt was to be disciplined and calm .But something had worried Edgar - he did not like the war , he liked the peace but master Konto said that he have to like the war , becouse the war is the way of Kel Dors' life .


The Way

Discovering of The Order

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Two years after Edgar had become an apprentice of Konto Ohaar , there was outbreak of war on Dorin between the jedi supporters and the Baran Do supporters .Master Ohaar make Edgar commander in general Kay's army and send him to Herin .However as Edgar's forces were travelling to Herin , they had decided to take a rest near Kremon Ha. But later that day they found themselvels in an ambush. In the battle of Kremon Ha , Edgar led the assaut but he did not heard Kay's order of retreat and a lot of Kel Dor soldiers dead. Commander Edgar was badly wounded and capture by jedi supporters and General Kay did not have this luck . Edgar woke up in a hospital , on Coruscant . He saw the other side - the jedis' world and he was surpriced . The jedis were not monsters they were peacekeepers .Until Edgar watched through the window he understood something - The Force let him to Coruscant . Then Edgar decided to become a jedi .

Initiateship

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After Edgar had arrived in the Jedi Temple. He was hopeful at the temple for about one year.In that time the council watch after him . After many months of hard training , Jedi Master Zree granted Edgar the rank of initiate ,witch means a student who have to teach from the acts of the other members of the order .Edgar was initiate for 3 years .In that time Edgar learnt about the other members and how to fight with double sabers , to be desciplinned and calm .Fighting with double sabers is really a rare as jedi style only two or three other jedis fight with double sabers so it is interesting how Edgar should be trained. One month after he was accepted as initiate , he had been sent on Yavin 4 to be trained by Kyle Katarn , strange , but powerful person .


The Academy on Yavin 4

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On Yavin Edgar was trained by Kyle Katarn for 3 years . The first training was not easy at all becouse Edgar faced new and powerful oponents .By the time the Kel Dor became more powerful and calm than before . After the trainings Cool was sent to 20 missions where he fought againt the folowers of Raghnos's cult at all well-known planets . But Edgar was trait by his best friend Rosh Penin who joined the Dark Side .Then our hero faced a great challenge - to kill Rosh and join the Dark side or to remain the jedi of Light side and the Kel Dor made the right decission , he did not kill Penin . But the hardest battle was on Koriban where Edgar fought against Tavion , the big boss and Marka Raghnos himself ! But in the end the jedi kill Raghnos and there was a happy end . Afret Edgar's returning to Coruscand the great master Therein took the Kel Dor as his padawan and that is how Edgar's great way to glory begun .


Padawanship

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