Edgar Khoul

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Two years after Edgar had become an apprentice of Konto Ohaar ,  there was outbreak of war on Dorin between the jedi supporters and the Baran Do supporters .Master Ohaar make  Edgar commander in general Kay's army and send him to Herin .However as Edgar's forces were travelling to  Herin , they had decided to take a rest near Kremon Ha. But later that day they found themselvels in an ambush. In the battle of Kremon Ha  , Edgar led the assaut but he did not heard Kay's order of retreat and a lot of Kel Dor soldiers dead. Commander Edgar  was badly wounded and capture by jedi supporters and General Kay did not have this luck .
Two years after Edgar had become an apprentice of Konto Ohaar ,  there was outbreak of war on Dorin between the jedi supporters and the Baran Do supporters .Master Ohaar make  Edgar commander in general Kay's army and send him to Herin .However as Edgar's forces were travelling to  Herin , they had decided to take a rest near Kremon Ha. But later that day they found themselvels in an ambush. In the battle of Kremon Ha  , Edgar led the assaut but he did not heard Kay's order of retreat and a lot of Kel Dor soldiers dead. Commander Edgar  was badly wounded and capture by jedi supporters and General Kay did not have this luck .
Edgar woke up in a hospital , on Coruscant . He saw the other side - the jedis' world and he was surpriced . The jedis were not monsters they were peacekeepers .Until Edgar watch�d through the window he understood something - The Force let him to Coruscant . Then Edgar decided to become a jedi .
Edgar woke up in a hospital , on Coruscant . He saw the other side - the jedis' world and he was surpriced . The jedis were not monsters they were peacekeepers .Until Edgar watch�d through the window he understood something - The Force let him to Coruscant . Then Edgar decided to become a jedi .
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===Initiateship===

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Edgar Khoul
Basic information
Homeworld Dorin
Physical description
Species Kel Dor
Gender Male
Age 14
Height 6 ft
Hair color no hair
Eye color Unknown
Cybernetics None
Chronological and political information
Era(s)
  • Rise of the Empire era
  • New Republic era
  • New Jedi Order era
Affiliation
  • The Order
  • New Republic
  • Galactic Federation of Free Alliances
Rank Jedi Padawan
Caste Consular
Known masters
Known apprentices
  • N/A
Other information
Weapon Double Dragon Lightsaber
Ship N/A


" The Emotions must not control the actions"
- Master Therein

Edgar Khoul is a male Kel Dor from the planet of Dorin who became a Jedi Padawan of The {J}edi Order. An apprentice to Jedi Consular Therein,a member of the council and one of the best jedis ever , he is learning the ways of the force .

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Biography

Early Life

The Way

250px-Dorin.jpg < The Planet of Dorin 

Edgar Khoul was planet in the Expansion Region, the homborn on Dorin , a dark and dusty eworld of the Kel Dors . His father was Sacks Khoul , a locan merchant and a supporter of the tradition of Baran Do .On Dorin the elders senced the force in the youngsters and trained them in the ways of the force .But the elders were not peace keepers , they used the force for making and winning wars . That was why the elders did not trust the jedis.As youngster Edgar became apprentice of Konto Ohaar . He gave him basic knowledge about the Force - how to use the Force for making predictions and pushing and pulling things. Master Konto Ohaar thaught Edgar how to control his emotions and clear his mind , how to behave .But the most valuable teaching that Edgar learnt was to be disciplined and calm .But something had worried Edgar - he did not like the war , he liked the peace but master Konto said that he have to like the war , becouse the war is the way of Kel Dors' life .

Discovering of the Order

Two years after Edgar had become an apprentice of Konto Ohaar , there was outbreak of war on Dorin between the jedi supporters and the Baran Do supporters .Master Ohaar make Edgar commander in general Kay's army and send him to Herin .However as Edgar's forces were travelling to Herin , they had decided to take a rest near Kremon Ha. But later that day they found themselvels in an ambush. In the battle of Kremon Ha , Edgar led the assaut but he did not heard Kay's order of retreat and a lot of Kel Dor soldiers dead. Commander Edgar was badly wounded and capture by jedi supporters and General Kay did not have this luck . Edgar woke up in a hospital , on Coruscant . He saw the other side - the jedis' world and he was surpriced . The jedis were not monsters they were peacekeepers .Until Edgar watch�d through the window he understood something - The Force let him to Coruscant . Then Edgar decided to become a jedi .

Initiateship

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