This article needs to be edited to conform to Interactive Fiction-style prose. It may need one or more of the following:
To be written in the second person, with the reader as protagonist;
To follow the POV of only the protagonist (e.g. only narrate the reader's thoughts and observations, as the reader can't know what other characters are thinking, unless he/she is telepathic);
To only include choices in the decision paths (e.g. a decision path should be a choice between two or more decisions, not two or more realities - a decision path shouldn't say A: You have $50 in your wallet or B: You have $400 in your wallet. Such a choice provides alternate realities, not alternate decisions.
