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| - | This article needs to be edited to conform to Interactive Fiction-style prose. It may need one or more of the following: | + | ---- |
| + | ''This article needs to be edited to conform to Interactive Fiction-style prose. It may need one or more of the following:'' | ||
*To be written in the second person, with the reader as protagonist; | *To be written in the second person, with the reader as protagonist; | ||
*To follow the POV of only the protagonist (e.g. only narrate the reader's thoughts and observations, as the reader can't know what other characters are thinking, unless he/she is telepathic); | *To follow the POV of only the protagonist (e.g. only narrate the reader's thoughts and observations, as the reader can't know what other characters are thinking, unless he/she is telepathic); | ||
| - | *To only include choices in the [[decision path|decision paths]] (e.g. a decision path should be a choice between two or more decisions, not two or more realities - a decision path shouldn't say A: You have $50 in your wallet or B: You have $400 in your wallet. Such a choice provides alternate realities, not alternate decisions. | + | *To only include choices in the [[decision path|decision paths]] (e.g. a decision path should be a choice between two or more decisions, not two or more realities - a decision path shouldn't say A: You have $50 in your wallet or B: You have $400 in your wallet. Such a choice provides alternate realities, not alternate decisions. |
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[[Category:Narratives Needing Edits|{{PAGENAME}}]] | [[Category:Narratives Needing Edits|{{PAGENAME}}]] | ||
[[Category:Narrative templates|{{PAGENAME}}]] | [[Category:Narrative templates|{{PAGENAME}}]] | ||
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