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A heavy fist pounded down on the table, "Dammit, Jeanne, you were followed here!"  
A heavy fist pounded down on the table, "Dammit, Jeanne, you were followed here!"  
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Before she could reply, a heavyset figure in the shadow loaded a shotgun and growled, "Quick bitching at her, Hank, and pass me those grenades."
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Before she could reply, A heavyset figure in the shadow loaded a shotgun and growled, "Quick bitching at her, Hank, at pass me those grenades."
With a flash of long red hair, Jeanne grabbed a headset, mumbled an apology, and made for the back door.
With a flash of long red hair, Jeanne grabbed a headset, mumbled an apology, and made for the back door.
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Hank glares at you and says, "Well? Get moving!"
 
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--[[Hank goes to cover the front entrance]]
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--[[You go to cover the front entrance]]
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--[[Hank goes to cover the back entrance]]
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--[[You go to cover the back entrance]]
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