Talk:Welldweller

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*Okay...I swear I'm not trying to pick on you here, but I have more issues with your article.
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*It's your charrie's article so you can do what you want with it, but I think it would look a little nicer if you combined the "Welldweller" and "New Member" sections. It would make the page look a little less choppy.
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**1. The "Welldweller" and "New Member" chapters can be combined. There's really no need for them to be separate.
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**2. "Soon, he began to keep a record of everything that happened, a "Rings Record" as he affectionately called it. This would become a powerful source of information in the future." You say its "a powerful source of information", but...where is it? It don't see it IC. Or OOC.
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**3. "Welldweller would soon become a prominent activist against the mooks" ...Where? When? Maybe this is true, but I haven't seen it.
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**4. "He also took part in the c davis conflict," I disagree. The only person who "took part" in c_davis' thread was c_davis. Welldweller replied to the thread, yes, but that's not really "taking part" in the plot, imo.
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Sorry. I'm not TRYING to get on your case, but this article just seems like there's a lot more in it than there needs to be. x_x You don't HAVE to change anything, but I think editing a bit making make it more readable and correct. [[User:Gigi|Gigi]] 20:21, 11 December 2007 (EST)
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*Nice article. Lots of content. Howevaaa: "the legendary Ripple in which these members saved the world from the wraiths." I don't remember us saving the world. I just remember lots of users going "OMG MY LEG SUDDENLY HURTS FOR SOME REASON!" lol. I could be wrong, though, too lazy to look. [[User:Gigi|Gigi]] 13:39, 18 November 2007 (EST)
*Nice article. Lots of content. Howevaaa: "the legendary Ripple in which these members saved the world from the wraiths." I don't remember us saving the world. I just remember lots of users going "OMG MY LEG SUDDENLY HURTS FOR SOME REASON!" lol. I could be wrong, though, too lazy to look. [[User:Gigi|Gigi]] 13:39, 18 November 2007 (EST)

Revision as of 22:03, 14 December 2007

  • It's your charrie's article so you can do what you want with it, but I think it would look a little nicer if you combined the "Welldweller" and "New Member" sections. It would make the page look a little less choppy.


  • Nice article. Lots of content. Howevaaa: "the legendary Ripple in which these members saved the world from the wraiths." I don't remember us saving the world. I just remember lots of users going "OMG MY LEG SUDDENLY HURTS FOR SOME REASON!" lol. I could be wrong, though, too lazy to look. Gigi 13:39, 18 November 2007 (EST)
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