Batman: Masked Souls

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The camera zooms suddenly into the top right-hand corner of sky surrounding the logo, and moves through the clouds.<br>
The camera zooms suddenly into the top right-hand corner of sky surrounding the logo, and moves through the clouds.<br>
Opening Credits fly past.<br>
Opening Credits fly past.<br>
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The camera slows, and we are-''<br>
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The camera slows, and we are-<br>''
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OVER RESEARCH FACILITY
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EXT. OVER RESEARCH FACILITY
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The camera catches up with a mysterious, dark aircraft-the Batwing. The plane’s cloaking device activates, and the plane gradually fades from view. The camera zooms into the invisible craft, and then-<br>
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''The camera catches up with an aircraft-the Batwing. The plane’s cloaking device activates, and it gradually fades from view. The camera zooms into the invisible plane.''
INT. BATWING COCKPIT
INT. BATWING COCKPIT
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Alfred (over Batwing video feed): All set, Master Bruce?<br>
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ALFRED :( over Batwing video feed): All set, Master Bruce?
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Batman: (nodding slowly) I’ve been wanting to find out what’s going on down there for a very long time.<br>
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BATMAN: (nodding slowly) I’ve been wanting to find out what’s going on down there for a very long time.  
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Cockpit hisses open slowly, and Batman steps out.<br>
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Cockpit hisses open slowly, and Batman steps out.
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Alfred (over Batman’s cowl radio): The photo-electric detection beams should be easy enough to clear.<br>
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ALFRED (over Batman’s cowl radio): The photo-electric detection beams should be easy enough to clear.
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Batman’s POV: We see the heads-up-display change colour to reveal a thick lattice of slowly-moving lasers.<br>
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Batman’s POV: The heads-up-display change colour to reveal a thick lattice of slowly-moving lasers.
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Batman: (chuckles) Yeah.<br>
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BATMAN: As you might say, “Indeed”
''The cockpit closes behind him, and Batman is seemingly standing on nothing. He leaps off the plane’s surface.
''The cockpit closes behind him, and Batman is seemingly standing on nothing. He leaps off the plane’s surface.
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EXT. HALEY’S CIRCUS-DURING PERFORMANCE
EXT. HALEY’S CIRCUS-DURING PERFORMANCE
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Announcer: (faintly) Please welcome our most prized act, residents of the Haley’s circus for five years now…The Flying Graysons!<br>
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ANNOUNCER: Please welcome our most prized act, residents of the Haley’s circus for five years now…The Flying Graysons! Be prepared for they’re stunning aerobatics – without the safety of a net!
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''The camera cuts to a trapeze high above the ground, showing a trio of aerialists.''<br>
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''Insert cut – three aerialists are perched on a trapeze post high above the ground''
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Dick Grayson: (laughs) Here we go again, Dad and Mom!<br>
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DICK GRAYSON: (laughs) here we go again, Dad and Mom!  
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John Grayson: All right, Robin!<br>
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JOHN GRAYSON: All right, Robin!
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''His parents smile. They leap off the trapeze together, all at once. Applause is audible in the background, and then the camera suddenly cuts to the POV of a sniper. The aerialists perform another jump. Both adults are in the scope. The sniper fires twice, and hits both parents. They fall slowly, and the camera cuts away before they hit the ground. The audience gasps, and the managers go into frenzy onstage.''
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MARY GRAYSON: Remember to smile!
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Dick: (finishes jump) Dad! Mum! (climbs down from perch on the trapeze)<br>
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''They leap off the trapeze one after the other, perform several somersaults and catch the trapeze at the other end at different times. Applause is audible in the background. The Grayson’s then perform another trick.''
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The sniper packs up and disappears from the circus. Dick stands over his parents’ bodies, distraught. Te audience hurriedly evacuates the circus tent.<br>
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INT. SPECTATOR’S STANDS
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INT. OVER RESEARCH FACILITY
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''The silhouette of an audience member is visible. He is holding what seems to be a cigarette lighter. He flips open the cap and pushes down.
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Batman (to Alfred, over cowl radio): (checking altitude display) I’ve cleared most of it Alfred, but this is the hard part.<br>
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Insert cut - a close-up of the wires which hold the aerialists up. A small explosion goes off, severing the wires. John and Mary Grayson suddenly fall, with Dick left standing prepared to do another jump.''
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''The camera follows Batman down, through the last of the lasers. He nearly sets of one alarm. Batman then deploys a stronger blast from his jetpack, slowing him down. He tumbles and lands on the ceiling of one of the buildings. Suddenly, a searchlight beam washes over the roof.''
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DICK GRAYSON: NO! Dad… Mum…
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Batman: (softly) Damn! (rolls under conveniently nearby water tank)<br>
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MARY GRAYSON: Robin…
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''Batman takes the moment to tune into the radio frequency of the security in the facility.''
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''The camera cuts away before Dick Grayson’s parents hit the ground. Dick quickly descends from his position, while the frightened audience hurriedly evacuates the tent. The managers go onto frenzy onstage and Dick is left standing distraught over the bodies of his parents.''
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Security officer (over Batman’s cowl radio): “We have reports of an unidentified object, most likely a person making an entry into the compound via airdrop. We have traced a clear heat signature, but can find no trace of the drop vehicle. We advise that you…”<br>
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INT. OVER RESEARCH FACILITY
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Batman switches off the radio and moves quickly and quietly to the roof access, remotely jamming the security camera at its entrance. Halfway down the stairs, Batman encounters three security personnel.<br>
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''Batman checks his altitude display as he falls.<br>
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The camera follows Batman down, through the last of the lasers. He nearly sets of one alarm. Batman then deploys a stronger blast from his jetpack, slowing him down. He tumbles and lands on the ceiling of one of the buildings. Suddenly, a searchlight beam washes over the roof.''
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Security Man 1: We got him! (begins shooting)<br>
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BATMAN: (softly) Damn! (Rolls under nearby water tank)
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Batman ducks and instinctively reaches into his utility belt for a batarang.<br>
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''Batman takes the moment to tune into the radio frequency of the security in the facility.''
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Security Man 2: Come on! (fires repeatedly at Batman’s hand)<br>
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SECURITY OFFICER (over Batman’s cowl radio): “We have reports from sentry guards of an unidentified object making entry into the compound via airdrop. We advise that you…”
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Batman lets go of the Batarang in shock and winces slightly.<br>
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Security Man 3: Heh heh, wish you stayed with Mommy eh?<br>
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''Batman switches off the radio and moves quickly and quietly to the roof access. He notices a security camera, glancing up. Batman then approaches the stairs and makes it seem like he will descend them.
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''Batman immediately produces two large batarangs which he uses to duel with his attackers, wielding them dangerously. The security men are in shock, since they know nothing about martial arts.''<br>
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He fishes a marble out from his utility belt and drops it down the stairs, making it sound as if he has gone down them. Batman then hides, standing flush to the wall.''  
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Security Man 1: Whoa! Take it easy, man!<br>
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INT. STAIRWELL BASE
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''Batman calmly twirls both weapons, displaying effortless skill. A few more shots ricochet off the walls of the stairwell as Batman fights his way down.''  
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''A few guards enter the stairwell.''
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GUARD 1: You hear that? Come on.
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Security Man 2: (over radio) Backup, backup!<br>
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GUARD 2: Sounds like the guy they were talking about on the radio.
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''Batman slices Security Man 2’s gun clean in half with the sharp edge of the Batarang, then knocks him out with the blunt side, all in the same move, as the other two begin to panic. The Dark Knight then puts his batarangs away, instead producing the smaller ones he planned to use initially. Throwing them, he knocks out both escaping personnel.''<br>
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GUARD 3: (laughs) the intruder is some shock jock?
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Batman: (to self) The first fight is always the least spectacular.<br>
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The security men make their way up quickly up the stairs.
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Alfred: (over cowl radio) I must say sir that your entrance did make up for it.<br>
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GUARD 2: Shut up and move.
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Batman: (Chuckles) routine enough, by my standards.<br>
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The three reach the top of the stairs.
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INT. BATCAVE<br>
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GUARD 2: Nobody?
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Alfred: (to Batman, looking at his POV through Batcomputer screen) All in a night’s work, Master Bruce?<br>
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GUARD 3: Maybe it’s a ghost. Maybe the same one that possessed boss to buy over this dump.
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Batman: Yeah…<br>
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GUARD 1: Man, so long as I have a job I’m fine.
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''We see the scene from Batman’s POV, through the computer screen. Batman walks over to the unconscious security men, gently fishing a PDA out from Security Man 1’s pocket. Batman inspects it carefully, turning it over in his hand.''<br>
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GUARD 3: Whatever. I’ll go have a look.
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Batman: (reading off sticker label) “Lacidemoib Biomedical…” never heard of it. Sounds like it’s a company computer.<Br>
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Guard 3 emerges out of the stairwell with his gun at the ready and is greeted by the frightening image of the Batman.  
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''Batman switches the PDA on.''
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GUARD 3: What the…
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PDA’s electronic voice: Welcome, Nolan. Please enter your password.<br>
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''Batman slices Guard 3’s gun clean in half with the sharp edge of a large Batarang, then knocks him out with the blunt side, all in the same move, as the other two begin to panic. Batman then puts his batarangs away, instead producing smaller ones.''
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Alfred: These types usually carry the passwords on them…not like it matters much anyway.<br>
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GUARD 1: (into radio) Backup! Backup!
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INT. RESEARCH FACILITY
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''Throwing them, he knocks out both escaping personnel.''
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''Batman scans the security man for any documents, performing a quick search of his uniform. Nothing. Then, Batman flips over the guard’s nametag. The numerals “228626” are scrawled in pen on the back.''
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BATMAN: (to self) The first fight is always the least spectacular.
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Batman: Thought so too, Alfred.<br>
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ALFRED: (over cowl radio) I must say sir that your entrance did make up for it.
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''He punches in the code and begins interfacing. Soon, we see a map of the facility on the screen. Something catches Batman’s attention.''
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''Batman proceeds down the stairs and scans Guard 2 for any documents, performing a quick search of his uniform. He pulls out a PDA, examining it carefully. He then switches it on. The screen is blank.''
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Batman: (reading off map) “Holding Area”? What if… what if all this fuss has to do with this “holding area”? (Voice trailing off)<br>
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BATMAN: Biometrics.
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''Batman races to the “holding area” specified in the map, breathing heavily. GPS built into the map marks his location in the vicinity.''  
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''Batman takes the finger of Guard 2, pressing it to the sensor. The screen then activates.''
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Alfred: (over cowl radio) Slower sir, they might track you down.<br>
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ALFRED: (Over cowl radio) So your personal code is not the only reason you keep them alive.
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Batman: I think they might already have.<br>
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BATMAN: It’s still what I stick by.
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''The camera turns to reveal guards chasing Batman out of the building, shooting wildly and with guard dogs by their sides.
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Batman’s POV: He opens file marked “site map”. We see a map of the facility on the screen. Something catches Batman’s attention.
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Batman deploys canisters of gas behind him, choking the pursuers. Determination is visible behind the one-way lenses of his cowl, partly masked by the noxious fog.
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One guard dog escapes the fog, clawing at Batman and barking fiercely. Batman fights off the dog with his bare hands after a tense struggle and continues running.''<br>
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EXT. HOLDING AREA
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BATRMAN: (reading off map) “Holding Area”? What if all this fuss has to do with this “Holding area”?
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''The camera pans a bleak, mechanical space, which has the appearance of an abandoned biomedical research facility. Rows of large, metallic cabinets line the sides of the room. Faint blinking lights are the only sign that the area is somehow still in use. The camera follows Batman as he enters the room, still running. Batman slows down, now that he is alone, and pants. Silence. However, this silence is broken by a faint whimpering, which seems to be coming from behind the stark cabinets.''<br>
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''Batman races to the “holding area” specified in the map. GPS built into the PDA’s map marks his location in the vicinity.''  
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Batman: (to Alfred, over cowl radio) (slowly, but in a nervous manner) Did you catch that? <br>
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INT. RESEARCH FACILITY WALKWAY
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Alfred: (over cowl radio) The microphone is sensitive enough, sir. I suggest you see what’s behind those cabinets.<br>
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''Batman stops flush to the wall of a walkway. Guards run past. Batman then continues on his way.''
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Batman: (walks over to controls slowly) (running through possibilities) It could be some morbid experiment…cloning perhaps…animal mutations…<br>
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EXT. HOLDING AREA
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Batman stands over the set of controls which allow him access to the cabinet. He stops and ponders what he should do next.<br>
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''The camera pans a bleak, mechanical space, which has the appearance of an abandoned biomedical research facility. Rows of large, metallic cabinets line the sides of the room. Faint blinking lights are the only sign that the area is somehow still in use. The camera follows Batman as he enters the room, still running. Batman slows down, now that he is alone, and breathes. Silence. However, this silence is broken by a faint whimpering, which seems to be coming from behind the stark cabinets.
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Batman: (slowly, unsteadily) I’ve had bad, bad experiences with concealed cabinets before, Alfred…<br>
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Batman takes snapshots of the area with a miniature digital camera from his utility belt. He then quickly performs a thermal signature scan with another device.''
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''His train of thought is interrupted by a barrage of machine-gun fire.
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''Batman’s POV through thermal scanner: we see a strong heat signature coming from behind the cabinets.''
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A figure in a lab coat enters the holding area, with a small army of guards behind him. His nametag notes him as a certain “Dr. Woodrue”.''
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Batman: (looking for right words) Surprised?<br>
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BATMAN: I’m in over my head Alfred. This is something serious. Whatever’s behind that is…organic.
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Dr. Woodrue: Frankly, Demon Bat, it is no surprise. How the company suddenly shut down, how I disappeared from the wonderful biomedical scene…that was the surprise. I had expected you to visit a lot earlier, frankly. I know you want to find out what’s in there, what has been keeping money coming in.<br>
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ALFRED: I suggest sir, you open it up and see what’s behind.
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''Dr. Woodrue produces an odd-looking weapon.''<br>
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''Batman hears something and spins round with a Batarang at the ready. He sees a man in a lab coat enters the holding area, with a small army of guards behind him. His nametag notes him as a certain “Dr. Woodrue”.''
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Batman: If that gets anywhere near my DNA…<br>
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DR. WOODRUE: Demon Bat. It is no surprise. I know you want to find out what’s in there, what has been keeping money coming in.
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Dr. Woodrue: …So you are smarter than you seem…<br>
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Dr. Woodrue produces an odd looking weapon
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''Batman ducks, activates the controls and flings a Batarang at the weapon as fast as he can. The cabinet doors open, and at the same time the fluorescent green substance within the weapon’s cartridges leaps up at Dr. Woodrue. Meanwhile, the guards raise their weapons, aiming them at Batman yet unsure whether or not to fire.''<br>
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BATMAN: That’s a DNA Neucleotide mutagen…The kind STAR labs tried to manufacture...
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Dr. Woodrue: Ahhh!
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''The substance fuses into Dr. Woodrue’s body, leaves begin sprouting and his skin turns to hard wood, in a slow, excruciating process. However, that is not where Batman’s attention lies. He turns to the now open cabinets, but the camera does not yet follow his gaze.''<br>
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DR. WOODRUE: …So you are smarter than you seem…
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Batman: (slowly) Alfred…<br>
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''Batman ducks, activates the controls for the cabinet and flings the Batarang at the weapon as fast as he can. The cabinet doors open, and at the same time the fluorescent green substance within the weapon’s cartridges leaps up at Dr. Woodrue. Meanwhile, the guards raise their weapons, aiming them at Batman yet unsure whether or not to fire.''
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''The camera pans, still keeping the suspense, to reveal children packed tightly into the cramped space of the metallic cabinets. Some are sleeping, while most look on in frightened silence. Realisation dawns on Batman.''
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DR. WOODRUE: Ahhh!
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Batman: It’s a child trafficking…<br>
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''The substance fuses into Dr. Woodrue’s body, leaves begin sprouting and his skin turns to hard wood, in a slow, excruciating process. The camera quickly cuts away to where Batman’s attention now lies.''
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''The guards open fire viciously, interrupting Batman’s realisation. Fueled by anger at the situation, Batman charges in, taking them out with whatever skill he can muster. He scatters multiple flashbang and smoke grenades on the floor, casting all the guards into confusion as he continues his rampage. Some of them pull masks to their faces in time, and continue firing. By now, most of the children are deeply frightened and confused by the smoke and the gunfire. The camera moves around Batman as he continues to take out the guards, ripping off their masks.
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BATMAN: (slowly) Alfred…
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''The metallic cabinet opens to reveal children packed tightly into the cramped space of the metallic cabinets. Some are sleeping, while most look on in frightened silence. Batman reacts, shocked.
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The guards open fire viciously, interrupting Batman’s realisation. Fueled by anger at the situation, Batman charges in, taking them out with whatever skill he can muster. He scatters multiple flashbang and smoke grenades on the floor, casting all the guards into confusion as he continues his rampage. Some of them pull masks to their faces in time, and continue firing. By now, most of the children are deeply frightened and confused by the smoke and the gunfire. The camera moves around Batman as he continues to take out the guards, ripping off their masks.
The last of the smoke dies down, and the camera reveals an army of unconscious guards, a writhing Dr. Woodrue and Batman standing in the middle of it all.  
The last of the smoke dies down, and the camera reveals an army of unconscious guards, a writhing Dr. Woodrue and Batman standing in the middle of it all.  
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Batman walks to the children in the cabinet, by the wall.''<br>
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Batman walks to the children in the cabinet, by the wall.''
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Batman: (Touches one child’s hand) It’s going to be okay.<br>
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BATMAN: (Touches one child’s hand) it’s going to be okay.
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''Batman keys in a number into his wrist pad, making a phone call.''<br>
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Batman keys in a number into his right wrist pad, making a phone call.
INT. GORDON’S OFFICE
INT. GORDON’S OFFICE
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''The telephone rings in Gordon’s office. The camera zooms in to reveal this is not Gordon’s personal telephone, evident from the stark Bat-symbol, sleek, futuristic design and lack of interface. The phone continues beeping.''<br>
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''The telephone rings in Gordon’s office. The camera zooms in to reveal this is not Gordon’s personal telephone, evident from the stark Bat-symbol, sleek, futuristic design and lack of interface. The phone continues beeping.''
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Commissioner Gordon: (to himself) He doesn’t use that line often…<br>
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GORDON: (to himself) He doesn’t use that often…
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Commissioner Gordon: (picks up phone) Hello?<br>
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GORDON: (picks up phone) Hello?
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Batman: (over phone) (in a slightly shaky voice) This is important.<br>
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BATMAN: (over phone) (in a slightly shaky voice) This is important.
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Commissioner Gordon: It always is with you, anyway. So why didn’t you just drop by like you always…<br>
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GORDON: It always is with you, anyway. So why didn’t you just drop by like you always…
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Batman: GORDON! It’s a child trafficking ring.<br>
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BATMAN: GORDON!  
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Commissioner Gordon: (sits up) What?<br>
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GORDON: (sits up) What?
INT. HOLDING AREA
INT. HOLDING AREA
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Batman: Whatever Dr. Woodrue’s being hiding…you told me to look into it. Now I know what’s going on, and it’s not pretty…<br>
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BATMAN: Whatever Dr. Woodrue’s being hiding…you told me to look into it. Now I know what’s going on, and it’s not pretty…  
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''The camera turns to Dr. Woodrue, his grotesque transformation now complete.''<br>
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The camera turns to Dr. Woodrue, his transformation now complete.
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…then again neither is he.<br>
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…then again neither is he.
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Commissioner Gordon: (over cowl phone) What do you want the PD to do?<br>
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GORDON: (over cowl phone) What do you want the PD to do?
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Batman: Storm the compound, and get the children out of there. (Turns to anguished face of child) Immediately.<br>
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BATMAN: Storm the compound, and get the children out of there. (Turns to anguished face of child) Immediately. I’ve already disabled most of the security features.
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Commissioner Gordon: (over cowl phone) Storm the facility? We need a warrant for that!<br>
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GORDON: (over cowl phone) Storm the facility? We need a warrant for that!
INT. GORDON’S OFFICE
INT. GORDON’S OFFICE
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The screen on the telephone suddenly flickers to life with a video image. The children appear onscreen.<br>
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The screen on the telephone suddenly flickers to life with a video image. The children appear onscreen.
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Batman: (voice in background of video) This is your bloody warrant. I’ll meet you at the entrance.<br>
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BATMAN: (voice in background of video) This is your bloody warrant. I’ll meet you at the entrance.
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''The screen zaps off and Batman’s voice is cut''<br>
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The screen zaps off and Batman’s voice is cut.
EXT. ENTRANCE OF RESEARCH FACILITY
EXT. ENTRANCE OF RESEARCH FACILITY
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''Armoured vehicles crash through the electronic fence, the shock bouncing harmlessly off the plating. They are followed by a group of squad cars, and a few large police busses. Gordon steps out of an armoured vehicle and walks towards Batman.''
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''Armoured vehicles crash through the electronic fence, now deactivated. They are followed by a group of squad cars, and a few large police busses. Gordon steps out of an armoured vehicle and walks over to Batman.''
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Batman: I guessed I could trust you.
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BATMAN: Thank you for coming.
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Gordon: I’ve always trusted you. Heck, three quarters of my own police department don’t, but I do.<br>
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GORDON: That should be my line.
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Policemen rush into the facility in the background.<br>
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Policemen rush into the facility in the background.
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Gordon: We’ll clear the area, arrest anybody else and take away key personnel for interrogation.<br>
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GORDON: We’ll clear the area, arrest anybody else and take away key personnel for interrogation.
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Batman: I doubt Dr. Woodrue’s in the mood.<br>
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BATMAN: I doubt Dr. Woodrue’s in the mood.  
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Gordon: I figured. He’s going straight to Arkham.<br>
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GORDON: I figured. He’s going straight to Arkham.
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Batman: It’s not just his mood…I won’t spoil the surprise for your officers.<br>
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BATMAN: It’s not just his mood…I won’t spoil the surprise for your officers.
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Gordon: (shrugs) I’m no stranger to bizarre, since you came on the scene. Anyway, we’ll get the kids into the busses, and settle their situation soon enough. We’ll try and return them to their parents, or the original adoption agencies, whichever. My guess is that Woodrue was tricking potential foster parents, rich ones, into thinking that his was a legit adoption agency, then charging them way extra. These kids were most likely snatched from unsuspecting parents, or poached from other agencies.<br>
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GORDON: I’m no stranger to the bizarre, since you came on the scene. Anyway, we’ll get the kids into the busses, and settle their situation soon enough.  
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Batman: Or even worse, child experimentation for his projects.<br>
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BATMAN: These kids were most likely snatched from unsuspecting parents, or poached from other adoption agencies. Maybe it’s child trafficking. Or even worse, child experimentation for his projects.
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Gordon: (shudders) Don’t want to consider that!<br>
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GORDON: (shudders) Don’t want to consider that!
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Batman: (reaches into utility belt) Here’s something I…retrieved from one of the guards. The map will tell you where the children are. It’s marked “holding area”.<br>
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BATMAN: (reaches into utility belt) Here’s something I…retrieved from one of the guards. The map will tell you where the children are. It’s marked “holding area”.
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''Batman passes Gordon the PDA.''
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Batman passes Gordon the PDA.
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Gordon: It’s been abrupt, as always, but…<br>
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GORDON: It’s been abrupt, as always but…
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Batman: (smiles slightly)…Thanks?<br>
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''A loud whoosh is audible, and the Batwing, hovering above the facility all the while, gently descends into view, now hovering just above the ground''
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Gordon: Yeah. You go get some rest.<br>
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GORDON: (taken aback) You jumped in from that?
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''A loud whoosh is audible, and the Batwing, hovering above the facility all the while, quickly descends into view, landing in the facility.''<br>
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BATMAN: The photo-electric detection beams prevented me from getting closer and I hoped I would achieve the element of surprise.  
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Gordon: Whoa!<br>
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GORDON: Oh.
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Batman: I’m on my way.<br>
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BATMAN: I’m on my way.
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''Batman gets into the vehicle, which slowly disappears into the night.''<br>
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''Batman climbs into the vehicle, which slowly disappears into the night.''
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Gordon: I gotta get me one of those.<br>
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GORDON: I gotta get me one of those.

Revision as of 06:01, 5 October 2007

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To help you read it easier, the script has been broken into parts. Part one is, well, a scroll or two away. Links to the rest are here.

Batman: Masked Souls Part 2
Batman: Masked Souls Part 3
Batman: Masked Souls Part 4
Batman: Masked Souls Part 5
Batman: Masked Souls Part 6
Batman: Masked Souls Part 7


We know it's terribly long, so to convince you to read on further here's a synopsis.

Synopsis

Batman: Masked Souls chronicles how young circus aerialist Dick Grayson came into the care of foster father Bruce Wayne (who secretly is Batman) as well as his first adventures as the Boy Wonder. The personal struggle of Dick Grayson's, as well as the tragic loss of his parents, is one that Batman understands well.

The story's main supervillain is Bane, a highly intelligent convict who posseses the powers of super-strength. He escapes from a high-security prison, destroying the prison and a luxury cruise liner on the way, in order to venture to Gotham to confront the Batman for himself. A mysterious connection between Bane and a twisted biochemist is revealed. Bane is also assisted by the alluring Maria, with whom he became romantically involved while they were in prison together.

Together, they stymie the Gotham Police Department. After a break-in into Wanye Industries Headquarters, during which Robin was nearly killed, everyone knows they have more on their hands than they bargained for. The story's climatic finale, in which Bane ventures to break the Bat in his own headquarters, proves the ultimate test if The Dark Knight and his apprentice will choose to show mercy under the intense circumstances.

They story draws its influences heavily from the comcis and, though not intended, can take place during the continuity of the Batman Begins storyline. Many elements have also been altered, and a new character in the form of Maria is introduced. Expeect plenty of action and what I hope is a sufficeintly gripping storyline. Eschewing the camp and homo-erotic undertones of Batman Forever and Batman and Robin, the relationship between Bruce and Dick is seen as purely foster father-son. Also, Bane finally gets to talk! He is portrayed as more intelligent than the ghastly Batman and Robin incarnation.

Enjoy!

Part 1

Batman: Masked Souls
Screenplay by Jedd Jong Yue
Started: 26/5/07

The Warner Brothers Logo. Atmosphere fades and the surroundings darken to evening.
The camera zooms suddenly into the top right-hand corner of sky surrounding the logo, and moves through the clouds.
Opening Credits fly past.
The camera slows, and we are-

EXT. OVER RESEARCH FACILITY

The camera catches up with an aircraft-the Batwing. The plane’s cloaking device activates, and it gradually fades from view. The camera zooms into the invisible plane. INT. BATWING COCKPIT

ALFRED :( over Batwing video feed): All set, Master Bruce?

BATMAN: (nodding slowly) I’ve been wanting to find out what’s going on down there for a very long time.

Cockpit hisses open slowly, and Batman steps out.

ALFRED (over Batman’s cowl radio): The photo-electric detection beams should be easy enough to clear.

Batman’s POV: The heads-up-display change colour to reveal a thick lattice of slowly-moving lasers.

BATMAN: As you might say, “Indeed”

The cockpit closes behind him, and Batman is seemingly standing on nothing. He leaps off the plane’s surface. The camera follows Batman as he falls in a seemingly carefree manner with flames faintly trailing from his jetpack, and then cuts to his POV, showing how he winds through the lasers. We see a sharp flash, and suddenly we are-

EXT. HALEY’S CIRCUS-DURING PERFORMANCE

ANNOUNCER: Please welcome our most prized act, residents of the Haley’s circus for five years now…The Flying Graysons! Be prepared for they’re stunning aerobatics – without the safety of a net!

Insert cut – three aerialists are perched on a trapeze post high above the ground

DICK GRAYSON: (laughs) here we go again, Dad and Mom!

JOHN GRAYSON: All right, Robin!

MARY GRAYSON: Remember to smile!

They leap off the trapeze one after the other, perform several somersaults and catch the trapeze at the other end at different times. Applause is audible in the background. The Grayson’s then perform another trick.

INT. SPECTATOR’S STANDS

The silhouette of an audience member is visible. He is holding what seems to be a cigarette lighter. He flips open the cap and pushes down.

Insert cut - a close-up of the wires which hold the aerialists up. A small explosion goes off, severing the wires. John and Mary Grayson suddenly fall, with Dick left standing prepared to do another jump.

DICK GRAYSON: NO! Dad… Mum…

MARY GRAYSON: Robin…

The camera cuts away before Dick Grayson’s parents hit the ground. Dick quickly descends from his position, while the frightened audience hurriedly evacuates the tent. The managers go onto frenzy onstage and Dick is left standing distraught over the bodies of his parents.

INT. OVER RESEARCH FACILITY

Batman checks his altitude display as he falls.
The camera follows Batman down, through the last of the lasers. He nearly sets of one alarm. Batman then deploys a stronger blast from his jetpack, slowing him down. He tumbles and lands on the ceiling of one of the buildings. Suddenly, a searchlight beam washes over the roof.

BATMAN: (softly) Damn! (Rolls under nearby water tank)

Batman takes the moment to tune into the radio frequency of the security in the facility.

SECURITY OFFICER (over Batman’s cowl radio): “We have reports from sentry guards of an unidentified object making entry into the compound via airdrop. We advise that you…”

Batman switches off the radio and moves quickly and quietly to the roof access. He notices a security camera, glancing up. Batman then approaches the stairs and makes it seem like he will descend them.

He fishes a marble out from his utility belt and drops it down the stairs, making it sound as if he has gone down them. Batman then hides, standing flush to the wall.

INT. STAIRWELL BASE

A few guards enter the stairwell.

GUARD 1: You hear that? Come on.

GUARD 2: Sounds like the guy they were talking about on the radio.

GUARD 3: (laughs) the intruder is some shock jock?

The security men make their way up quickly up the stairs.

GUARD 2: Shut up and move.

The three reach the top of the stairs.

GUARD 2: Nobody?

GUARD 3: Maybe it’s a ghost. Maybe the same one that possessed boss to buy over this dump.

GUARD 1: Man, so long as I have a job I’m fine.

GUARD 3: Whatever. I’ll go have a look.

Guard 3 emerges out of the stairwell with his gun at the ready and is greeted by the frightening image of the Batman.

GUARD 3: What the…

Batman slices Guard 3’s gun clean in half with the sharp edge of a large Batarang, then knocks him out with the blunt side, all in the same move, as the other two begin to panic. Batman then puts his batarangs away, instead producing smaller ones.

GUARD 1: (into radio) Backup! Backup!

Throwing them, he knocks out both escaping personnel.

BATMAN: (to self) The first fight is always the least spectacular.

ALFRED: (over cowl radio) I must say sir that your entrance did make up for it.

Batman proceeds down the stairs and scans Guard 2 for any documents, performing a quick search of his uniform. He pulls out a PDA, examining it carefully. He then switches it on. The screen is blank.

BATMAN: Biometrics.

Batman takes the finger of Guard 2, pressing it to the sensor. The screen then activates.

ALFRED: (Over cowl radio) So your personal code is not the only reason you keep them alive.

BATMAN: It’s still what I stick by.

Batman’s POV: He opens file marked “site map”. We see a map of the facility on the screen. Something catches Batman’s attention.

BATRMAN: (reading off map) “Holding Area”? What if all this fuss has to do with this “Holding area”?

Batman races to the “holding area” specified in the map. GPS built into the PDA’s map marks his location in the vicinity.

INT. RESEARCH FACILITY WALKWAY

Batman stops flush to the wall of a walkway. Guards run past. Batman then continues on his way.

EXT. HOLDING AREA

The camera pans a bleak, mechanical space, which has the appearance of an abandoned biomedical research facility. Rows of large, metallic cabinets line the sides of the room. Faint blinking lights are the only sign that the area is somehow still in use. The camera follows Batman as he enters the room, still running. Batman slows down, now that he is alone, and breathes. Silence. However, this silence is broken by a faint whimpering, which seems to be coming from behind the stark cabinets.

Batman takes snapshots of the area with a miniature digital camera from his utility belt. He then quickly performs a thermal signature scan with another device.

Batman’s POV through thermal scanner: we see a strong heat signature coming from behind the cabinets.

BATMAN: I’m in over my head Alfred. This is something serious. Whatever’s behind that is…organic.

ALFRED: I suggest sir, you open it up and see what’s behind.

Batman hears something and spins round with a Batarang at the ready. He sees a man in a lab coat enters the holding area, with a small army of guards behind him. His nametag notes him as a certain “Dr. Woodrue”.

DR. WOODRUE: Demon Bat. It is no surprise. I know you want to find out what’s in there, what has been keeping money coming in.

Dr. Woodrue produces an odd looking weapon

BATMAN: That’s a DNA Neucleotide mutagen…The kind STAR labs tried to manufacture...

DR. WOODRUE: …So you are smarter than you seem…

Batman ducks, activates the controls for the cabinet and flings the Batarang at the weapon as fast as he can. The cabinet doors open, and at the same time the fluorescent green substance within the weapon’s cartridges leaps up at Dr. Woodrue. Meanwhile, the guards raise their weapons, aiming them at Batman yet unsure whether or not to fire.

DR. WOODRUE: Ahhh!

The substance fuses into Dr. Woodrue’s body, leaves begin sprouting and his skin turns to hard wood, in a slow, excruciating process. The camera quickly cuts away to where Batman’s attention now lies.

BATMAN: (slowly) Alfred…

The metallic cabinet opens to reveal children packed tightly into the cramped space of the metallic cabinets. Some are sleeping, while most look on in frightened silence. Batman reacts, shocked.

The guards open fire viciously, interrupting Batman’s realisation. Fueled by anger at the situation, Batman charges in, taking them out with whatever skill he can muster. He scatters multiple flashbang and smoke grenades on the floor, casting all the guards into confusion as he continues his rampage. Some of them pull masks to their faces in time, and continue firing. By now, most of the children are deeply frightened and confused by the smoke and the gunfire. The camera moves around Batman as he continues to take out the guards, ripping off their masks. The last of the smoke dies down, and the camera reveals an army of unconscious guards, a writhing Dr. Woodrue and Batman standing in the middle of it all. Batman walks to the children in the cabinet, by the wall.

BATMAN: (Touches one child’s hand) it’s going to be okay.

Batman keys in a number into his right wrist pad, making a phone call.

INT. GORDON’S OFFICE

The telephone rings in Gordon’s office. The camera zooms in to reveal this is not Gordon’s personal telephone, evident from the stark Bat-symbol, sleek, futuristic design and lack of interface. The phone continues beeping.

GORDON: (to himself) He doesn’t use that often…

GORDON: (picks up phone) Hello?

BATMAN: (over phone) (in a slightly shaky voice) This is important.

GORDON: It always is with you, anyway. So why didn’t you just drop by like you always…

BATMAN: GORDON!

GORDON: (sits up) What?

INT. HOLDING AREA

BATMAN: Whatever Dr. Woodrue’s being hiding…you told me to look into it. Now I know what’s going on, and it’s not pretty…

The camera turns to Dr. Woodrue, his transformation now complete.

…then again neither is he.

GORDON: (over cowl phone) What do you want the PD to do?

BATMAN: Storm the compound, and get the children out of there. (Turns to anguished face of child) Immediately. I’ve already disabled most of the security features.

GORDON: (over cowl phone) Storm the facility? We need a warrant for that!

INT. GORDON’S OFFICE

The screen on the telephone suddenly flickers to life with a video image. The children appear onscreen.

BATMAN: (voice in background of video) This is your bloody warrant. I’ll meet you at the entrance.

The screen zaps off and Batman’s voice is cut.

EXT. ENTRANCE OF RESEARCH FACILITY

Armoured vehicles crash through the electronic fence, now deactivated. They are followed by a group of squad cars, and a few large police busses. Gordon steps out of an armoured vehicle and walks over to Batman.

BATMAN: Thank you for coming.

GORDON: That should be my line.

Policemen rush into the facility in the background.

GORDON: We’ll clear the area, arrest anybody else and take away key personnel for interrogation.

BATMAN: I doubt Dr. Woodrue’s in the mood.

GORDON: I figured. He’s going straight to Arkham.

BATMAN: It’s not just his mood…I won’t spoil the surprise for your officers.

GORDON: I’m no stranger to the bizarre, since you came on the scene. Anyway, we’ll get the kids into the busses, and settle their situation soon enough.

BATMAN: These kids were most likely snatched from unsuspecting parents, or poached from other adoption agencies. Maybe it’s child trafficking. Or even worse, child experimentation for his projects.

GORDON: (shudders) Don’t want to consider that!

BATMAN: (reaches into utility belt) Here’s something I…retrieved from one of the guards. The map will tell you where the children are. It’s marked “holding area”.

Batman passes Gordon the PDA.

GORDON: It’s been abrupt, as always but…

A loud whoosh is audible, and the Batwing, hovering above the facility all the while, gently descends into view, now hovering just above the ground

GORDON: (taken aback) You jumped in from that?

BATMAN: The photo-electric detection beams prevented me from getting closer and I hoped I would achieve the element of surprise.

GORDON: Oh.

BATMAN: I’m on my way.

Batman climbs into the vehicle, which slowly disappears into the night.

GORDON: I gotta get me one of those.

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