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::*For this story, make the time travel be very ambiguous... have it happen at an ancient location, a city or a very far away place not touched by humans in millenia. Make it a location that is described as being a place where "time simply doesn't work right". Explanation would be that it is the focus of the convergence of the current, where the power that flows through the world is driven, the driving force, central location where all time and current converges. Time works differently there (possibly make it in the middle of the ocean on a small island, in the middle of the "burmuda triangle" in the ocean that has prevented people from finding the lost continents of the east)... and the current can be used there by anyone... and the area has a number of other unique properties. None the less, being that time doesn't work the same there, it would likely respond to the thoughts of any inhabitents, and that future or past will be shaped by their mind. The future they see isn't necessarily the future that will happen, but often times it is. Explore this concept and really hash it out and perfect it. | ::*For this story, make the time travel be very ambiguous... have it happen at an ancient location, a city or a very far away place not touched by humans in millenia. Make it a location that is described as being a place where "time simply doesn't work right". Explanation would be that it is the focus of the convergence of the current, where the power that flows through the world is driven, the driving force, central location where all time and current converges. Time works differently there (possibly make it in the middle of the ocean on a small island, in the middle of the "burmuda triangle" in the ocean that has prevented people from finding the lost continents of the east)... and the current can be used there by anyone... and the area has a number of other unique properties. None the less, being that time doesn't work the same there, it would likely respond to the thoughts of any inhabitents, and that future or past will be shaped by their mind. The future they see isn't necessarily the future that will happen, but often times it is. Explore this concept and really hash it out and perfect it. | ||
::::*It might be referred to as a "gateway" and could serve as the convergence of time on the planet (ie the dark platform on Chrono Trigger for example). Maybe it isn't as unpredictable as my previous explanation - perhaps it is a point on the planet where one can exist outside time and manipulate it, much like the gods do. Perhaps allow communication with the gods here, or whatever. Yes - make this the time platform. I love this - big time novel idea. | ::::*It might be referred to as a "gateway" and could serve as the convergence of time on the planet (ie the dark platform on Chrono Trigger for example). Maybe it isn't as unpredictable as my previous explanation - perhaps it is a point on the planet where one can exist outside time and manipulate it, much like the gods do. Perhaps allow communication with the gods here, or whatever. Yes - make this the time platform. I love this - big time novel idea. | ||
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*COULD go with a somewhat technological thing here... think of several video games and technology still existing in the "medieval" world... links electric/metal boots, chrono trigger... Mana fortress, Symphonia... | *COULD go with a somewhat technological thing here... think of several video games and technology still existing in the "medieval" world... links electric/metal boots, chrono trigger... Mana fortress, Symphonia... |