User talk:NeonxXxLights

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If you are going to contribute to Smutty Sex Romp, please make sure you use proper grammar. I have been working on this story for several years and I do not allow contributions unless they are written correctly. --Platypus 21:29, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

While your grammar isn't horrendous (I've seen people post in text-speak), you do need to work on proper capitalization with dialogue.

Incorrect: "I don't know," He murmurs.

Correct: "I don't know," he murmurs.

And if you're going to write someone speaking in Shakespearean dialect, you need to know that thou = you, thy = your, except in front of a vowel, in which case it's thine (thy hand, thine eye). --Platypus 22:38, 3 May 2011 (UTC)