Open the door and great whoever awaits there

From Create Your Own Story

Somewhat to your surprise the creature standing before you as you open the door is not a monster but a simple man. He is however a man who inspires authority, an sense of professionalism engulfs him. Most people would probably follow his command assuming he is right even if he’s not.

It’s weird that his personality should catch your attention before his looks does. He stands tall with jet black hair and thick eye brows. There is somewhat of a constant smirk on his face giving him a rather sly look. He holds his hands behind his back and his posture looks like something out of the military. Despite his thick eye brows he looks rather young and energetic.


“Good day mister Fletcher, or would the proper term be good night mister Fletcher?”

Before you have any chance to reply he somewhat surprisingly extends his hand looking for a friendly handshake. You shake his hand and he continues with the introductions.

“Anton Gonchar”

“John Fletcher, although you obviously already knew that mister Gonchar” It’s not the face that gives him away, but you know that at the exact moment you told him your name a small surprise overwhelmed him. He chooses to simply nod in response, letting the ball fall back into your corner.

“So… how can I help you mister Gonchar?”

He chuckles a bit before responding. “Oh, of course how silly of me. It’s actually Dr Anton Gonchar. I was fortunate to be in the lobby when you collapsed so I decided to check how you were doing Mister Fletcher.”

“Why didn’t you take me to an hospital?” You ask.

“I was quite confident that you were in an stable condition, no excessive medical attention was necessary.” “Ah.” You say doubting his answer for some reason.

“So may I come in? For an quick check up to make sure you’re alright” He asks.


You’re not sure that you can trust Anton. How could he be absolutely certain that you were unharmed? Wouldn’t it be better to call an ambulance just to be safe? But what’s more alarming is the brief period where you feet that you could practically read his mind. He was genuinely surprised when he heard you name was John Fletcher. Maybe you should simply close the door on him?


Invite Anton in but watch him closely

Tell Anton that you are fine and that no medical checkup is necessary

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