Girl Scout Camp/Editing Notes

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This page contains notes that may help contributors to the story.

For now, I am in the middle of publishing what I have already written offline so please hold all contributions until I am finished.

Contents

Beginnings

There are four beginnings to the story depending on who you had sex with at the end of Girl Scout Cookies:

Format

The story is broken into a number of chapters that represent a segment of time over the weekend. Within each chapter are a number of short encounter opportunities. Most of the scenarios provided are complete -- most contributions should be in the form of new encounters.

Contributors can add a new "chapter" to the story. Find the start of the chapter which is just after the one you want to add. Find all of the pages that link to it. Update all of those pages to continue at your chapter instead of the original chapter and have your chapter end by branching to the existing chapter.

Magic Words

Because the system is stateless, whenever you have a sexual encounter with a girl, you will get a magic word. The phrase 'magic word' should always link to the Girl Scout Camp/Magic Words page and the word itself should always be in bold.

Right now, all magic words are the names of fruit.

If you add a new magic word, be sure to update both general opportunities:

For the end, the use of templates keeps the repetition of pages to a minimum. Each page keeps track of the "score" that you have earned and includes a template that provides the description for that keyword.

In the endgame, you generally get 2 "points" if you had sex with a girl in a way that she found enjoyable and 1 "point" if you didn't have sex but made the girl very happy. You get no points for sexual encounters where the girl doesn't get any satisfaction.

Right now, there are 3 chapters where encounters are possible. Thus, a perfect score is 6 and a "winning" score is 5 or more. If a new chapter is added, or if opportunities are added to the Lunch chapter, a perfect score would increase and the winning score should be updated to match.

If possible before the departure and after/during lunch there should be some sort of link to the previous events. The special words should be used for this and there should be 2 special scenes from Kat and Yuriko and Sophie and Amber if you have the magic words from the latter that could only be obtained from the former's magic word.

Additional note - I have spent some considerable time this weekend restoring the integrity of the original author's scoring system after finding that contributors had added new encounters and an additional sub-chapter at the beginning without updating, or incorrectly updating, the templates and pages used for the scoring at the end of the story. New contributors should take care to do this properly or it spoils the game for others. To avoid the need to rework the templates extensively it is suggested that one of the existing "decoy" magic words which leads to a bad ending is used for new encounters (don't use Mandarin or Papaya as these are "good" magic words but lead to a bad ending if the player uses them before another required word). The perfect score is now 8 but I have left the winning score as 5. Itsuki1965 10/10/2020

Girls

There are 33 girls attending camp, plus 4 staff members (including yourself). Not all girls are described yet, but here is a table of the ones mentioned. If you need someone new, just add them to the list.

Girls

  • Amber (boating, CTF prisoner, 5’6”, D cup, short curly brown hair)18
  • Amy (hike)
  • Anne (blond tent problems, 5’10”, C cup, med blonde hair in twin pigtails)18
  • Claire (from original story, 5’7”, full breasts, shoulder length curly brown hair)18
  • Daniela (kitchen, Latina, 5'4", hourglass figure, curly black hair) 17
  • Elise (Group Tent, White, 5’3”, petite, straight brown hair) 18
  • Ellen (vball, 5’9”, athletic, med brown hair)17
  • Emily (making eyes at Jim at lunch, 5’4”)17
  • Grace (Group Tent, 5’5” athletic, long red hair) 18
  • Jacee (Group Tent, 5’2” petite, small tits, short black hair with blue in it) 18
  • Julie (hike, kitchen, French, 5'7", slender with small but perfectly shaped breasts and butt, shoulder length brown hair) 18
  • Joy (hike)
  • Karen (tentmate of Emily, 5’5”, large tits, shoulder, curly hair)17
  • Kate (hike)
  • Kathryn (tent making out, hurt at vball, 5’5”, avg build, tight curly blonde hair)
  • Kim (vball/parking lot, 5'2, Asian, petite build, short black hair with bangs)17
  • Lin (from original story, 5’4, Asian, petite, long black hair)18
  • Mia (Group Tent, 5’2”, hourglass figure, big tits, long Brunette hair) 18
  • Michelle (tentmate of Rachel, 5’4”, Black, large tits, big bubble butt)17
  • Rachel (cheat at vball, 5’5”, short pixie-like red hair)17
  • Robin (vball, CTF scout, 6’1”, med tits, long brown hair in ponytail)18
  • Sandy (blonde tent problems, 5’11”, C cup, long straight blonde hair)
  • Sophie (swimming lesson, 5’9”, D cup, long black hair)18
  • Tina (diversion during CTF, 5’2”, B cup, short black hair)18
  • Tiffany (vball)
  • Yuriko (tent making out, hiking trip, 5’3”, D cup, Rich Asian with Tan skin and long straight blonde hair)17
  • Zoe (tent by herself, (looks 14), 5’0”,petite build, short dark brown hair)17

Staff

  • Yourself (M, mid-20s, self-insert your looks)
  • Peggy Lowenstern (F, camp counselor, 5'9", body toned and tanned from outdoor activity, curly brown hair)27
  • Mira (F, assistant camp counselor, 5'2", Asian, nerdy looking but full figure, short black hair and glasses) 22
  • Jim (M, college student)20

You are not intended or expected to use detailed descriptions, but data is provided her to help make references consistent.

In general, there should only be one chance to sexually interact with each girl.

NOTE: Long time fan, first time contributor here. After many years, someone (me) is adding a lunch chapter. I encourage you to read it, but if you want here, here's a SPOILER. I decided to add some variety to the encounters by making my additions to lunch centering on Peggy the head counselor and Mira, a new character and assistant counselor. Both involve more dom/sub sex dynamics depending on your interaction with Mira or Peggy in the scene. I tried my best to keep with the tone and tempo of the story so far, including some unrealistic interactions that somehow work in your favor lol. I also included two more conventional encounters with two campers that can happen in the kitchen. I also tried my best to make everything internally reference other events both in the scenarios I wrote and earlier in the story. So if you're not a cheater who just backs up if something doesn't go your way, you can learn about potentially missed previous encounters from the dialogue.

This isn't hard and fast because I can't make you do anything, but if you wanted to expand on lunch and add some other kind of encounter, I would recommend giving the reader another reason to wander off and maybe find some stragglers who didn't go to lunch for some reason. The possibilities are endless from there.

/s Bobthebuilder(10/16/2022)


‘’’’ Note: I am a new contributor and I am adding the group tent option. It will give the chance to have a an orgy with the group of girls. Im going to try to do a spin the bottle game, and a strip poker game. Wish me luck. /s Daddy573(9/19/2024)

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