Girl Scout Camp/Editing Notes

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This page contains notes that may help contributors to the story.

For now, I am in the middle of publishing what I have already written offline so please hold all contributions until I am finished.

Contents

Beginnings

There are four beginnings to the story depending on who you had sex with at the end of Girl Scout Cookies:

Format

The story is broken into a number of chapters that represent a segment of time over the weekend. Within each chapter are a number of short encounter opportunities. Most of the scenarios provided are complete -- most contributions should be in the form of new encounters.

Contributors can add a new "chapter" to the story. Find the start of the chapter which is just after the one you want to add. Find all of the pages that link to it. Update all of those pages to continue at your chapter instead of the original chapter and have your chapter end by branching to the existing chapter.

Magic Words

Because the system is stateless, whenever you have a sexual encounter with a girl, you will get a magic word. The phrase 'magic word' should always link to the Girl Scout Camp/Magic Words page and the word itself should always be in bold.

Right now, all magic words are the names of fruit.

If you add a new magic word, be sure to update both general opportunities:

For the end, the use of templates keeps the repetition of pages to a minimum. Each page keeps track of the "score" that you have earned and includes a template that provides the description for that keyword.

In the endgame, you generally get 2 "points" if you had sex with a girl in a way that she found enjoyable and 1 "point" if you didn't have sex but made the girl very happy. You get no points for sexual encounters where the girl doesn't get any satisfaction.

Right now, there are 3 chapters where encounters are possible. Thus, a perfect score is 6 and a "winning" score is 5 or more. If a new chapter is added, or if opportunities are added to the Lunch chapter, a perfect score would increase and the winning score should be updated to match.

If possible before the departure and after/during lunch there should be some sort of link to the previous events. The special words should be used for this and there should be 2 special scenes from Kat and Yuriko and Sophie and Amber if you have the magic words from the latter that could only be obtained from the former's magic word.

Additional note - I have spent some considerable time this weekend restoring the integrity of the original author's scoring system after finding that contributors had added new encounters and an additional sub-chapter at the beginning without updating, or incorrectly updating, the templates and pages used for the scoring at the end of the story. New contributors should take care to do this properly or it spoils the game for others. To avoid the need to rework the templates extensively it is suggested that one of the existing "decoy" magic words which leads to a bad ending is used for new encounters (don't use Mandarin or Papaya as these are "good" magic words but lead to a bad ending if the player uses them before another required word). The perfect score is now 8 but I have left the winning score as 5. Itsuki1965 10/10/2020

Girls

There are 29 girls attending camp, plus 4 staff members (including yourself). Not all girls are described yet, but here is a table of the ones mentioned. If you need someone new, just add them to the list.

Girls

  • Amber (boating, CTF prisoner, 5’6”, D cup, short curly brown hair)18
  • Amy (hike)
  • Anne (blond tent problems, 5’10”, C cup, med blonde hair in twin pigtails)18
  • Claire (from original story, 5’7”, full breasts, shoulder length curly brown hair)18
  • Ellen (vball, 5’9”, athletic, med brown hair)17
  • Emily (making eyes at Jim at lunch, 5’4”)17
  • Julie (hike)
  • Joy (hike)
  • Karen (tentmate of Emily, 5’5”, large tits, shoulder, curly hair)17
  • Kate (hike)
  • Kathryn (tent making out, hurt at vball, 5’5”, avg build, tight curly blonde hair)
  • Kim (vball)19
  • Lin (from original story, 5’4, Asian, petite, long black hair)18
  • Michelle (tentmate of Rachel, 5’4”, Black, large tits, big bubble butt)17
  • Rachel (cheat at vball, 5’5”, short pixie-like red hair)17
  • Robin (vball, CTF scout, 6’1”, med tits, long brown hair in ponytail)18
  • Sandy (blonde tent problems, 5’11”, C cup, long straight blonde hair)
  • Sophie (swimming lesson, 5’9”, D cup, long black hair)18
  • Tina (diversion during CTF, 5’2”, B cup, short black hair)
  • Tiffany (vball)
  • Yuriko (tent making out, hiking trip, 5’3”, D cup, Rich Asian with Tan skin and long straight blonde hair)17
  • Zoe (tent by herself, (looks 14), 5’0”,petite build, short dark brown hair)17

Staff

  • Yourself
  • Peggy Lowenstern (F, camp counselor)
  • Jim (M, college student)

You are not intended or expected to use detailed descriptions, but data is provided her to help make references consistent.

In general, there should only be one chance to sexually interact with each girl.

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