User talk:117
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Make sure you are adding a Category to EVERY page you create. Seriously, don't incur the wrath of the Platypus. -BakaG 00:01, 13 July 2015 (UTC)
-- BakaG Will do b0ss, still getting familiar with this place. --117
Loving "Serenity". I'm particularly interested to see what happens in the story arc with Everlins. -- Teejay
-- Teejay Naaww, you. Thank you for the kind words. Just trying to kill time. --117
Umm, your Serenity: I noticed it does not quite flow properly. I followed one of the paths from your recent edit. It went from her with pants and panties off, to her having to take pants and panties off. It went from her walking nude through the streets after she threw away her clothes, to her having to take off her bra and panties when she got in the back of a van.
Just wanted to mention, you might want to go through some again and see what is not correct. --Dirty Me 09:08, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
-- Dirty Me Oh wow, thanks for that. It's been a while since I've gone down that story. --117 26 May 2016
lol, you know you should leave comments on the other person's talk page, or they do not get the "You have a new message" thing, right=P
I see them most of the time because I look at the recent changes page alot, but others might now.
Yeah, I know the feeling. One reason I try to read through if I am writing something that I have not done anything with for a while. I really should do that with Dirty Me. I did want to mention though, I like your story. Not so much on how she magically becomes some sort of sex crazed girl, but how you actually allow her to be something else. Too many stories on here have the girl becoming a sex crazed whore no matter what. Sadly, I have even wrote things similar in my stories to try to make people happier reading it. Maybe why some of my paths suck, when I write them for someone else, not because I write them for me? You allow many kinds of options. Just ignore the idiots and have a normal life, be a little crazy, or, well, go all the way.
From a girl's perspective, I am not saying it is realistic, but I didn't expect that, especially after reading so many stories on here and what guys seem to do to girls in their story fantasy. So, overall, I would say I actually enjoy yours much more than many others.
Anyways, I will shut up now...yes, I talk as much in real life... --Dirty Me 10:22, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
