User talk:117

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Make sure you are adding a Category to EVERY page you create. Seriously, don't incur the wrath of the Platypus. -BakaG 00:01, 13 July 2015 (UTC)

-- BakaG Will do b0ss, still getting familiar with this place. --117

Loving "Serenity". I'm particularly interested to see what happens in the story arc with Everlins. -- Teejay

-- Teejay Naaww, you. Thank you for the kind words. Just trying to kill time. --117

Umm, your Serenity: I noticed it does not quite flow properly. I followed one of the paths from your recent edit. It went from her with pants and panties off, to her having to take pants and panties off. It went from her walking nude through the streets after she threw away her clothes, to her having to take off her bra and panties when she got in the back of a van.

Just wanted to mention, you might want to go through some again and see what is not correct. --Dirty Me 09:08, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

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