User talk:Zoroastra

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Ah. Yes, I've kept Bloodsport off of the main page because it's not even 1 pages yet. But, what's existing so far can be found at this here link. --TheElderOnes 21:57, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Just getting back to you on your latest correspondence.

I myself have been taking a break (as if I even do anything to begin with >.>) from the site and have just started coming back. And as for the apostrophe situation, [1] <--- that might help.

And Bloodsport will resume as soon as I can figure out how I want to portray the scene with the Królowa Krwi before Marissa's first fight. THEN, I need to read some combat pages to see how it should best be done. But, hopefully I'll get my shit together soon. --TheElderOnes 11:39, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

Chlo's-Closet

I think it'd be awesome to have Lord Ruairi have a minor appearance in other storylines! However, if Saya met him in a tower, he was probably visiting someone, since he lives in this really excluded lake area. I didn't consider healing spells... he probably knows basics... Just for future reference, you could also play him as antagonist/villain, just as long as you have a good reason for his actions, since he's not evil, just manipulative. In any case, feel free to add a scene with him! I think it's a great idea. --Chlo 15:37, 10 February 2012 (UTC)

By the way, (I know, I know, I'm typing your ears off XD) what is the difference between equipment and possessions in the status indicator? I know that equipment is what she is wearing... but other than that, I'm not entirely certain. Please explain? --Chlo 18:49, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

I saw something similar in that Girl Scout Camp story. I thought it'd be easier to navigate if I just linked them together like that. That's why there's the code thing. --Chlo 18:19, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

You're right about the copy/paste thing, of course. I just wanted to get a move on with the plot, so I did that. Feel free to add extra details like tripping over the heavy dress etc.. In the coming scenes, I plan for there to be more variety.--Chlo 16:45, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, the basic plan for Arturia in this case seems to be to go straight to the suitor (ie Lord Ruairi), so that most of the drama will be there. But we'll see what happens, I guess. :) --Chlo 19:14, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Yay, I'm so happy that you like him! I really can't wait until the scene when he and Arturia meet. (Which is silly, since I'm probably going to be the one writing it.) On another topic, I'm working on the scene where Arturia leaves, and I'm checking back to the Saya scenes you wrote and using them for reference, so things may echo what you've written, just for continuity. And thanks for the tips. :) I'm still getting the hang of things around here.--Chlo 18:56, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Just letting you know that it is spelled "thought" not "tought". Also, words such as "wonderful", "beautiful", "bashful", etc. only have one L at the end. If you fix these in the continuing parts of the story it would save me a lot of work. Thanks! --Chlo 00:30, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

I like your Princess story. :) Just letting you know that I'll be editing spelling errors and changing sentence structure so that it's slightly easier to read. I may even add more, if I can think of something.--Chlo 00:32, 4 February 2012 (UTC)