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"Great," Janine said and returned to her preparations and you left her to watch some TV.  
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"Thank you," Janine says as she returns to her preparations. You leave her alone to go watch TV.  
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After an hour you heard doorbell. That meant your mother-in-law has arrived. From the hallway you could hear greetings of your wife, so you went there to greet Patricia. As expected she was alone. That was the best news for you for the last couple of months (which shows how much you loved your father-in-law) and your mood immediately raised.  
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About an hour later you hear the doorbell. That means your mother-in-law has arrived. From the hallway, you can hear your wife open the door and welcome Patricia, so you greet her as well. As expected, she's alone. Not having to put up with Neil is the best news you've had in months, which says a lot about your relationship with your father-in-law. The news brightens your mood considerably.
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"Hello," you said.
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"Hello," you say.
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"Hello, dear," Patricia answered with a big smile (looks like you are not the only one with good mood without Neil).
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"Hello, dear," Patricia answers with a big smile (looks like you are not the only one in a better mood without Neil).
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After some meaningless chat you all went to the dining table. At first your wife asked only about the other family members, but after half an hour and a bottle of red wine conversation turned right to the main subject.
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After some meaningless chit-chat, you all sit down at the dining table. At first, your wife asks only about her extended family, but after half an hour, and a bottle of red wine, the conversation turns toward the reason for the sudden family dinner.
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"So, mother, how is dad," Janine asked.
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"So, mother, how is dad?" Janine asks.
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"Like always, dear." Patricia sighed. "After a quarrel, I just decided to have some fresh air," she smiled. " I hope I hadn't made any problems to you."
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"Like always, dear." Patricia sighs. "After a quarrel, I just needed to get some fresh air," she smiles. " I hope I haven't made any problems for you."
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"Of course, mom," Janine hastened to assure, "you can live here as long as you want. Right, dear," Janine said to me and hit my ribs with elbow.
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"Of course not, mom," Janine says. "You can live here as long as you want. Right, dear?" Janine says to me as she elbows you in the ribs.
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"Of course," you said and blushed on how passionate it happened. Janine didn't notice anything but Patricia looked straight at you so you had had to look away.
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"Of course," you say. You start to blush because of how passionate those words sounded. Janine doesn't notice anything but Patricia looks straight at you. You look away, embarrassed.
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"Good," Patricia said and sipped some wine. Then after minute of silence she added, "Because I wanted to try something new." And you blushed some more.
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"Good," Patricia says as she sips some wine. Then, after a minute of silence, she adds, "Because I want to try something new." You blush some more.
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"Mom!" Janine jumped.
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"Mom!" Janine jumps.
"It's such a figure of speech." Patricia smiled.
"It's such a figure of speech." Patricia smiled.

Current revision as of 04:36, 30 May 2015

"Thank you," Janine says as she returns to her preparations. You leave her alone to go watch TV.

About an hour later you hear the doorbell. That means your mother-in-law has arrived. From the hallway, you can hear your wife open the door and welcome Patricia, so you greet her as well. As expected, she's alone. Not having to put up with Neil is the best news you've had in months, which says a lot about your relationship with your father-in-law. The news brightens your mood considerably.

"Hello," you say.

"Hello, dear," Patricia answers with a big smile (looks like you are not the only one in a better mood without Neil).

After some meaningless chit-chat, you all sit down at the dining table. At first, your wife asks only about her extended family, but after half an hour, and a bottle of red wine, the conversation turns toward the reason for the sudden family dinner.

"So, mother, how is dad?" Janine asks.

"Like always, dear." Patricia sighs. "After a quarrel, I just needed to get some fresh air," she smiles. " I hope I haven't made any problems for you."

"Of course not, mom," Janine says. "You can live here as long as you want. Right, dear?" Janine says to me as she elbows you in the ribs.

"Of course," you say. You start to blush because of how passionate those words sounded. Janine doesn't notice anything but Patricia looks straight at you. You look away, embarrassed.

"Good," Patricia says as she sips some wine. Then, after a minute of silence, she adds, "Because I want to try something new." You blush some more.

"Mom!" Janine jumps.

"It's such a figure of speech." Patricia smiled.

After that there wasn't anything interesting during dinner and when it was time to get up you suggested to

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