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* Well, if you're planning on rewriting it all, maybe you should just start a new story. Seems like you don't really like the title as is. You could come up with a plot outline, (or at least one plot outline. You kinda need multiple ones in a CYOA)then start a new one. That said, I do like your intro. I think it does a good job of setting up a mood. That's hard to do. I'm not sure I managed it in my main story. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:45, 27 October 2009 (PDT) | * Well, if you're planning on rewriting it all, maybe you should just start a new story. Seems like you don't really like the title as is. You could come up with a plot outline, (or at least one plot outline. You kinda need multiple ones in a CYOA)then start a new one. That said, I do like your intro. I think it does a good job of setting up a mood. That's hard to do. I'm not sure I managed it in my main story. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:45, 27 October 2009 (PDT) | ||
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Revision as of 20:13, 23 February 2012
If you really hate the title Afraid of the Dark, let me know what title you'd like and I'll see that the story gets moved (and the category changed on each page).--Platypus 06:29, 4 September 2009 (PDT)
I like your story Afraid of the Dark, and I'd like to see it go somewhere interesting. If you're not going to edit it much soon, would you mind telling me where (or wheres) you were thinking of going with it? I may or may not do much editing on it, but I don't want to touch it without at least knowing the plan. --Rawar 16:14, 27 October 2009 (PDT)
- Well, if you're planning on rewriting it all, maybe you should just start a new story. Seems like you don't really like the title as is. You could come up with a plot outline, (or at least one plot outline. You kinda need multiple ones in a CYOA)then start a new one. That said, I do like your intro. I think it does a good job of setting up a mood. That's hard to do. I'm not sure I managed it in my main story. --Rawar 19:45, 27 October 2009 (PDT)
Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 20:13, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
