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Oh, thanks! ^^' I've been told by my peers that I play a pretty good foreplay game when it comes to erotic writing, and I suppose that's quite apparent in this story, too. Aside from that, I'm glad I managed to make my first criticism here a positive one! :3 --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]] 03:31, 23 May 2016 (UTC) | Oh, thanks! ^^' I've been told by my peers that I play a pretty good foreplay game when it comes to erotic writing, and I suppose that's quite apparent in this story, too. Aside from that, I'm glad I managed to make my first criticism here a positive one! :3 --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]] 03:31, 23 May 2016 (UTC) | ||
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+ | lol, now for negative criticism. You should leave a message on my talk page. Only reason I know you responded is I saw you post in your user talk in the recent changes. If I hadn't seen that, I would never have known you replied. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:00, 23 May 2016 (UTC) |
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Oh...you have a message?
B-baka...it's not like I wanted to talk to you, or anything...
Leave your messages here ^-^
DirtyMeStoryTime's talk
Well, you mentioned you are looking for how well received your story is.
I do like that you do not start a story out with adult content, and make it seem a bit more story like than "Oh, how will we run our never ending sex marathon next". Anyways, that is all xD --Dirty Me 03:11, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
Oh, thanks! ^^' I've been told by my peers that I play a pretty good foreplay game when it comes to erotic writing, and I suppose that's quite apparent in this story, too. Aside from that, I'm glad I managed to make my first criticism here a positive one! :3 --Skyla 03:31, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
lol, now for negative criticism. You should leave a message on my talk page. Only reason I know you responded is I saw you post in your user talk in the recent changes. If I hadn't seen that, I would never have known you replied. --Dirty Me 06:00, 23 May 2016 (UTC)