User talk:Privatepirate
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Wow, you write alot on your edits. Is this a story you have already created, or just coming up with it as you go? I have thought of writing long form before choices, but I decided it might be better to have more control over it, at what seems like natural decision points. What do you think? Better to have a whole short story, or to have smaller pieces with more decisions? (Just adding my signature so you know who asked you this) --Dirty Me 02:13, 26 February 2014 (UTC)
Hey man, just wanted to tell you I appreciate your additions. Keep them coming!
Maybe I'm doing this wrong; I don't understand the ins and out of this site yet.
Mostly I come up with it as I go. I read the story a while back, so I was familiar with it. Upon reading it a second time I was able to really feel where I wanted to go.
As far as decision points go, I don't have a real answer. Sometimes the story benefits from one, or the other, or both. I've read stories where you get to chose your each and every move, and you can never really get into the story because you're too busy deciding if you should do one thing or the other. Of course, one can get lost in too many details. Many stories of faraway lands with foreign names and creatures are overwhelming. I do like to steer it in a direction, catering mostly to my fantasy, and let the reader pick it up from there.
You're definitely welcome. I'm glad to contribute, especially after dealing with a lack of motivation for so long. And it's not really fair to expect new content without submitting any of my own.
I doubt if you are doing it wrong. I was just making an observation and wondering how you felt about it. Honestly, I prefer to write more before decision points, but I was just wondering if I would have made it too long if I did that. That is why I was asking someone I noticed making many longer parts. I wish there was a way to take and do a page of something like: Here is your story so far with the choices you made. That would be nice to add in choices, then to show you a longer story and the results. Since this is the internet, not a physical book, it should be able to do it, but I am not sure if you could on this site, or how I would anyways. --Dirty Me 02:12, 26 February 2014 (UTC)
I was just worried about the commenting system, and getting that right, but it seems straightforward enough now.
Your idea is good, there's another site similar to this one called CHYOO and it automatically up dates a story map so you can follow all the chapter tiles in a bulleted format. So, for instance, All in the Family's story map would be:
1. "You grab the first piece of clothing..."
1.1 - "Find some porn"
1.1.1 - And so on and so on.
1.2 - "Go on some webcam page"
1.3 - "Start your text messenger"
2. "You run downstairs as quickly as possible..."
2.1 - "Time to jack off" 2.2 - "You shrug and go upstairs"
Except I'm not sure why the boxes are there... Each thread added is added (with a link) to the story map. It's nifty.
Since we don't have it here, it would be up to us to manage it. I imagine it would be best done through the "Category" option. You have the generic story title one, but then you can add something like "Staying at Stacy's" and add it to each thread that took you to Stacy's, but I'm a little unsure on how to organize it, except for what follows.
And you create another "option" to view all the threads/chapters/etc.. So you have:
You'll have to add something like "Chapter I" and "Chapter II" and so on...
I don't think I have entirely the right idea so far as one story containing a short and long version so much as I do for compiling the story.
Funny, I just looked that up, and found a literotica Chyoo forum. Is that a Literotica website, just under a different name? Just wondering because it would be ironic, since I have a few stories on literotica already. Yes, same user name too --Dirty Me 04:30, 26 February 2014 (UTC)
I'm not sure on the specifics, but they are together in some way.
CHYOO has been neglected a lot and recently developed a few problems, though it's still got some active users, and there's talk of a revamped site.
