User talk:CaptBob21

From Create Your Own Story

You need to work on your grammar, especially capitalization when using dialogue. If you cannot use proper grammar, anything you post in Rampage will be deleted. And no silly 'disguised' page names, either. Not in my story.

Also, your character is not a telepath. You cannot tell what other characters are thinking. --Platypus 01:28, 19 April 2013 (UTC)