Review: The Choices We Make

From Torg Adventure

The Choices We Make by daciasdesire

This was the first story I ever wrote threads for, so it holds a special place in my heart, ... well ... lower, really. I've written more threads for it (35) than any other story, with the exception of The Super, which ties at 35 and I edit.

On the surface, it's a pretty simple high school teenaged fantasy, but the wide variety of directions it goes, and the characters and plots all combine for a very satisfying story. Enough plot to make it interesting, and enough sex to keep it exciting. It also has some of the best written threads around. With 274 threads, it's one of the longer stories.

The story starts with the main character finding a ticket to the Korn concert that night. He has to decide whether to go to the concert or to the school dance. From these simple beginnings, the story branches into taking your sister's best friend to the concert, hooking up at the concert, naughtiness at a pre-dance party, downtown to a strip club, a blues club, sex in a barn, a jock party with strippers, the dance and what happens outside, a surprise visit from Sarah Banks, and more. Many surprises. Some familiar cliches that are nonetheless well-written. Some really great sex scenes.

My favorite characters are Rebecca the next-door neighbor, Katherine from accounting class, Mary the goth chick, Kelli the best friend's cousin, Fiona the sexy woman at the concert, and Trish the sister's best friend.

So, sit down and read it for a half hour. I think you'll like it. You'll probably read it for another two hours.