User talk:Tasteful Crude

From Create Your Own Story

You've made some fine contributions to Smutty Sex Romp, but there are a couple of things that I have to point out.

• Punctuation with dialogue:

"Hello," she said.

In this basic example, she said is known as the speaker tag. The dialogue (the words spoken) is enclosed in quotes and the tag is separated from the dialogue by another punctuation mark, which is enclosed inside the quotes. In this case, the mark is a comma. You keep incorrectly using a period. "Hello." she said. is not correct.

• Level numbers:

The level numbers in Smutty Sex Romp are not random. The story is designed with certain 'choke points'. Your scenario should stay level 1 until it comes to a conclusion. The character will then be directed to The Library, the Park, or the Gym to start level 2, and to The Dance Studio to start level 3.

• Asterisk before choices

You might notice that on every page of Smutty Sex Romp, there's a little dot in front of each option. You put this dot on the page by using the asterisk. Try to keep your pages formatted is the same style as the rest of the story.

Other than that, so far so good. Keep it up!

--Platypus 20:16, 13 December 2014 (UTC)