User talk:Minnie May Hopkins
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I changed your category link on Downfall/Carefully try to cup her breast to [[Category:Downfall: Bad Ending]]. I also created the category page for you, and linked it to the main story. It just seems to make more sense to me, personally, so that it shows what story the bad ending is in. My own stories have [[Category:Dirty Me Endings]], which is a subcategory of [[Category:Dirty Me]] so that it is all linked together.
If you don't like it, you can delete it I guess.
I did want to mention though, so glad to see someone who don't need warnings about categories and options and grammar. Keep up the wonderful work ^.^ --Dirty Me 02:11, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
If you're trying to avoid cross-linking by using complex page titles, you can use the Move tab to move the pages you've already created to new titles. That might be the easiest way to go about things.--Platypus 15:24, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
Hello I'm a new User and I can't wait to read more about Julianne, Will, Kristin and Debra and how they spend their days on vacation :) As "Dirty me" told you already : Keep up this wonderful work - the last time you added some new stuff was on 9 August 2014 what's long ago...Once again : I hope you didn't stop working on it - Best regards --User:John Aaron Jones 4 October 2014
Thank you for continuing your work... I wish you merry Christmas and a happy new year :) User:John Aaron Jones 22 December 2014
Thanks for your reply and the season's greetings... First off all let me tell you, that I am not a native speaker ( if you didn't suspect it ). I've learned english "Once upon a time at School" and after that I only have listened to music and watch some movies to keep it more or less fluid. Secondly I want to tell you that your story ist refreshingly different to the most other stories on this platform ( in general and not only in this section ). It's an ordinary story ( but 99 percent of all stories are, so I hope you known what I want to say ). Maybe, they got a good idea, but don't have the capability to tell a tale ( or they don't want to, who knows ?). You are telling a smart constructed story, teasing the readers, keep it plausible and don't let the things happen to fast ( because I don't like stories, where two people see each other, take their clothes off without a reason and so on and on... Do I have any suggestions or wishes ? Not now, but let me think about it. If I got an idea ( that match ) I will tell you immediatly. Finally : It's a nice idea for Julianne's path ( but to tell the truth : I didn't expected a loss at sea, but that's not bad, quite the contrary ) I'm looking forward to see what happens next ? --User:John Aaron Jones 25 December 2014
I agree with the fact that everyone who's looking below that big black border wants to read an adult story where something happens and that a story has not slavishly follow a plausible path ( the most of the time people don't act plausible at all :), I also agree with you that the pace of "Downfall" is really fast ( 5 days are not eternity ) but you wrote a lot of things beside the main path like the feelings, needs, doubts and some background information what make it as plausible as possible and... what's really important ( for me ) this brings the characters to life ( so I got the feeling to know them a bit ) - and I think that's the way a good story works. So, if english is not your native language, which is it ? If I may ask you ? You don't have to answer if you don't want to or when feeling uncomfortable with it. Mine is german by the way. The last item for today : Julianne's branch has started :) - and I think that the beginning with the moneysaving for the vacation leads automatically to Julianne ( because she's the only one who got a job and the wish to go on vacation with her kids ) Maybe it's better to write something like "The family saved enough money during the last months to spend some days on vacation together. What do you think ? ( I know that I am a bit petty-minded ) --User:John Aaron Jones 28 December 2014
Hello again, you're really as busy as a bee - and you have made a nice correction at the beginning. Happy New Year! --User:John Aaron Jones 05 January 2015
This is great stuff I really look forward to your updates! User:Solon 21 April 2015
Hello over there, long time no see. I'm still fascinated. You've done an amazing work until now... keep up ! I'm also look forward to your updates! User:John Aaron Jones 26 April 2015
Hi. Hm, yes I thought about it. If I will write some stuff it will be for my own story, because I think that it's more difficult to get in an existing one than create a new. By the way...the most of the stories aren't that good. But if they are, then I don't want to damage them (or they are private or asking for unediting). I got something in mind, but I'm not sure how to start. How did you do it ? Are you following an already existing idea or let it flow ? Do you write a draft before place it here ? Do you have a structure in the background so that you don't get lost in between ? I read my past postings...I didn't told you that I appreciate your sense of humor. So, now I have to take my seat in front of my monitor and keep waiting unimpatiently for some fabulous, funny and of course exciting news of Debra, Kirsten, Will and Julianne in "Downfall" :) --User:John Aaron Jones 15 May 2015
Currently the biggest problem is free time but your answers helped a lot. Now I know how to create a story. In the past I thought about some situations but not about an event where it should lead to. At all and to keep it in an easy way I will use the episodic kind like on tv (or like in downfall), because I think that I'm not trained enough in writing to try a story with an arc (to be true: I have no experience :). In fact that my english isn't as good as yours you have to be more patient than me, if interessted in the story. I guess it will take much longer to release an update. Feel free to make any suggestions or corrections. And I'm glad if you help me at some point (if you think it's necessary). Thank you. --User:John Aaron Jones 16 May 2015
Hm... okay...I'm a goon !!! Before we could talk about the contents or other things in the story (stories)... How do I create a new story (technical) ? I mean, how can I place the storytitle on the Mainpage, how can I tell the readers not to edit ecetera...? To be true, I have no idea how it works. Maybe (after shaking your head about this much ignorance) you can tell me that ? Sorry for asking, but I never done this before and I'm not well trained using a PC. Maybe it's really simple and I'm only thinking to complicated ? May I ask for your help ? --User:John Aaron Jones 25 May 2015 ---
Whoa, that were really quick and helpful answers, thank you! As you can see in the 'right' section... I started writing. But I can't promise that it will grow nearly as fast as yours. --User:John Aaron Jones 25 May 2015
It's me again... I was totally busy and didn't visit this page for more than a year (puh... time runs fast) - but there is no new content in this wonderful story... hm, have you stopped writing ? I hope everything's fine with you? Only you can bring Julianne and the others to life again. John Aaron Jones - November 1st 2016
Welcome Back
Nice to see someone who hasn't done a lot of writing in a while has come back for once!
Also, I am kinda liking your story, although I wish there was a bit more fleshed out development with Will & Debra's story arcs. --Durzan 16:05, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
Clarification, I would like to see a bit less redlinks on the arcs where will must sleep in a room with one of his sisters. --Durzan 03:43, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
