User talk:Fijjjiii42
From Create Your Own Story
Have you ever seen the meme 'Professionals have standards'?
Your most recent page, Put something other than your hands on the brunette, is missing a few things to be a complete page. Be sure to add a category to any page that you make. In the story you were editing, the category would be [[Category:Smutty Sex Romp]] , and you'd just plop it at the bottom of the page like any other link (most story categories are [[Category:StoryTitleHere]] , but you can check the bottom of any page in a story to see its category). I also recommend reading Basic page format for a few more pointers on pages.
Smutty Sex Romp's primary author, User:Platypus, has somewhat high standards for his stories (Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp). This isn't true on every story you'll read on the site, but Plat especially dislikes options that aren't things the main character ('you') should actually be able to choose. The reader shouldn't be able to choose whether the girl becomes distracted, as all options should be actions the protagonist can take ('She gets distracted' is not okay, but 'You distract her' might be). Each page of Smutty Sex Romp also includes a status bar that you need to copy-paste over from the previous page, and this goes for any story with a status bar.
Anyway, what I'm getting at is that you're probably better off contributing to a different (simpler) story until you learn the ropes. Feel free to come back afterwards and try your hand at Smutty Sex Romp with a bag full of Grammatical Tips and page-formatting knowledge.
