Talk:Kelly gets caught by Dan

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What does this mean?: Kelly start to move, she wanted to walk faster but because of the rope that has an line, which was in Dan's hands, she could not escape.

This makes no sense, and I can help you clean it up, but need to know what you mean by it.

Maybe something like: Kelly started to move. She wanted to run away, but the rope which bound her hands behind her back led to Dan, making it impossible to escape.

Does this seem to have the same meaning that you are looking for? If so, I recommend changing. --Dirty Me 02:39, 15 March 2016 (UTC)