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- 17:57, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m All Adult Stories (Moving "Art of Shinobi" into alphabetical order.)
- 10:06, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 18 year old Pusher- Go inside (top)
- 09:57, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Laboratory: Yell and try and wake one of them up (Need to take a line after each character speaks.) (top)
- 09:53, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 18 year old Pusher- Go to Rosa's home (Couple of simple grammar errors.) (top)
- 09:43, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Pokesex/Boy/Johto/Rape Her/Go for oral (Fixed grammar and spelling errors. "She likes the pleasure, not the fact she's being raped." Sounds legit.)
- 09:23, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 18 year old Pusher- Remove Lola's top (Fixed some cases of comma splicing and broke it into paragraphs.)
- 09:05, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Try to sweet talk her ("You are mom..." Really? I wasn't aware.) (top)
- 09:03, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Pokesex/Boy/Johto/Rape Her/Finish the job
- 08:59, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Pokesex/Boy/Johto/Rape Her (Couple of spelling and grammar errors.)
- 08:47, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 22 years old -female- Chunin (top)
- 08:39, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Land of Lightning (Nit-picking; but, technically, it's a statement, not a question.) (top)
- 08:37, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Land of Lightning (Found out it was intentional; but was misspelled and not capitalised.)
- 08:35, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 18 years old -female- Chunin (top)
- 08:35, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 16 years old -female- Chunin - (no sexual acts allowed on this line (top)
- 08:32, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 12 years old -female- Genin - (no sexual acts allowed on this line) (top)
- 08:28, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 22 years old -male- Chunin (Possessive problem and a typo.) (top)
- 08:25, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 18 years old -male- Chunin (top)
- 08:24, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 16 years old -male- Chunin - (no sexual acts allowed on this line (top)
- 08:22, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Team 7 (Six lines, three full stops and two capital letters. "You are name...") (top)
- 08:13, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m RMale - Taijutsu (Red ninjas stole the grammar.) (top)
- 08:07, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m RFemale - Taijutsu (Rouge is French for red. Rogue is what you're trying to spell.) (top)
- 08:04, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m 12 years old -male- Genin - (no sexual acts allowed on this line) (top)
- 08:03, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Uciha (Added grammar.) (top)
- 08:00, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Konoha Ninja (Grammar error.) (top)
- 07:57, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Rouge Ninja (It's rogue ninja, not rouge ninja. They aren't red ninja.) (top)
- 07:53, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Land of Iron (top)
- 07:51, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Member (top)
- 07:47, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Land of Lightning ("I wonder if you know killer be?" Not sure if that was intentional, so I left it, as is.)
- 07:27, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Build your own? Dude you rock! (Added grammar.) (top)
- 07:25, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Pick one from a MOVIE (top)
- 07:23, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Pick one from the SERIES (top)
- 07:20, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Art of the Shinobi (Small tidy up.) (top)
- 06:59, 9 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Cast an arouse spell (Removed commas, from after quotation marks.) (top)
- 22:33, 8 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m AIF Sit in front (Grammar and punctuation fixes, plus some sentence restructuring.)
- 22:17, 8 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m AIF Open Zoe (Another quick clean up.)
- 20:52, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Go outside for a walk (top)
- 20:50, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m "mmm keep going" (Punctuation goes inside quotation marks, not outside.) (top)
- 20:43, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Celia's Sex (top)
- 20:41, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Let her go1 (Really minor edit.) (top)
- 20:39, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Hold her down for Tommy (Punctuation always goes inside quotation marks. Always!) (top)
- 20:35, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Inside me!" (Dropped a few commas in.) (top)
- 20:34, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Her ass" (Added category.) (top)
- 20:30, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m My next door neighbors\Next morning (More grammar fixes and some minor rephrasing.) (top)
- 20:28, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m My next door neighbors\Just nod miserably (Few grammar fixes.) (top)
- 20:26, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m My next door neighbors\Let her go and slam the door (Added commas and fixed typo.) (top)
- 20:23, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m My next door neighbors\Stop her (More grammar fixes and restructuring.) (top)
- 20:19, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m My next door neighbors\Give her a shitty answer (Some grammar and tense fixes.) (top)
- 20:17, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m My next door neighbors\Look at her legs (Grammar fixes, with some slight rephrasing and restructuring.) (top)
- 20:12, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m My next door neighbors\Tell her it's no big deal (Fixed grammar errors.) (top)
- 17:48, 7 March 2015 (hist) (diff) m Your Best Friend's Younger Sister (Added a few commas, restructured a few sentences and spaced out the narration from the dialogue.)
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