Explosive City/Livin' on a Prayer/Say Yes

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-	"Okay," You say, "Next week."	+	"Okay," you say. "Next week."
	"Alright, talk to you next week." The guy and his friends walk away.		"Alright, talk to you next week." The guy and his friends walk away.
-	You're friends are so excited, saying how they always wanted to be famous.	+	Your friends are so excited, saying how they always wanted to be famous.
	You practice for an hour, and you call it a day.		You practice for an hour, and you call it a day.
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	You walk home feeling proud. You never felt better.		You walk home feeling proud. You never felt better.
-	When you get on you're bed you immedialy fall asleep.	+	When you get on your bed you immediately fall asleep.
	*[[zzzz....]]		*[[zzzz....]]
		+	[[Category: The Amazing Adventure]]

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Current revision as of 03:00, 28 March 2009

"Okay," you say. "Next week."

"Alright, talk to you next week." The guy and his friends walk away.

Your friends are so excited, saying how they always wanted to be famous.

You practice for an hour, and you call it a day.

You walk home feeling proud. You never felt better.

When you get on your bed you immediately fall asleep.

• zzzz....