Talk:The Abandoned Story
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*[[PC:Adjust the atmosphere]] | *[[PC:Adjust the atmosphere]] | ||
*[[PC:Fastforward in Time]] | *[[PC:Fastforward in Time]] | ||
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'''The Lost City of Atlantice:''' | '''The Lost City of Atlantice:''' | ||
*[[TLCA/Believe]] > Negotiate branch | *[[TLCA/Believe]] > Negotiate branch | ||
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*[[Run through the trees to the ocean]] > jump > water | *[[Run through the trees to the ocean]] > jump > water | ||
*[[You sleep in]] | *[[You sleep in]] | ||
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'''The Adventures of Sid:''' | '''The Adventures of Sid:''' | ||
*[[Float down a river in a box.]] > waterfall scene | *[[Float down a river in a box.]] > waterfall scene | ||
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'''The Rush to Class:''' | '''The Rush to Class:''' | ||
*[[Tell a teacher]] > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery | *[[Tell a teacher]] > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery | ||
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*[[Hurry and stuff it in your pocket]] > cleanup and add content | *[[Hurry and stuff it in your pocket]] > cleanup and add content | ||
*[[Ask principle for a band-aid]] > detention branch | *[[Ask principle for a band-aid]] > detention branch | ||
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'''Adventure:''' | '''Adventure:''' | ||
*[[Go to town]] | *[[Go to town]] | ||
*[[Go inside the log house]] | *[[Go inside the log house]] | ||
*[[To keep walking]] >fix branches | *[[To keep walking]] >fix branches | ||
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'''A Random Adventure:''' | '''A Random Adventure:''' | ||
*[[a random adventure]] | *[[a random adventure]] | ||
*[[a random adventure/push wall]] | *[[a random adventure/push wall]] | ||
*[[a random adventure/waitfordeath]] | *[[a random adventure/waitfordeath]] | ||
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'''So much random ya?''' | '''So much random ya?''' | ||
*[[SMRY?/Team Work]] | *[[SMRY?/Team Work]] | ||
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'''Adventure and Town of Barrhead:''' | '''Adventure and Town of Barrhead:''' | ||
*[[ToB/Main St.]] | *[[ToB/Main St.]] | ||
Revision as of 01:31, 7 May 2014
The following are abandoned stories from the pit that are planned to be incorporated into a larger story. Feel free to help create and contribute (but keep in mind that I will be harsh in editing your page if it's erroneous in grammar, voice, and formatting). Talk to me if you want to edit or have further questions. Thank you :) --Completionist 18:02, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
Contents |
Integrated Stories
See Category: The Abandoned Timeline [[1]]
Unintegrated Stories, by Category
- numbers in "()" indicate the original number of content in the particular story. Those without either have an unknown count of pages or have already been integrated into the story.
Mystery:
Red-links Section List
This is the place where we leave out a few red-links in a story for other people to branch out from. Note: The link will consist of the page containing the red-link, not the red-link itself. This will help whoever is writing to stay consistent with the details and formatting.
Planet Creator:
The Lost City of Atlantice:
- TLCA/Believe > Negotiate branch
- TLCA/Don’t Believe > Atlantice Branch
- Run through the trees to the ocean > jump > water
- You sleep in
The Adventures of Sid:
- Float down a river in a box. > waterfall scene
The Rush to Class:
- Tell a teacher > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery
- Ask to move lockers > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery
- TRTC/Locker > Enchanted Carrot intro
- Bananas
- TRTC/Female > Female POV, (conquering bullying build-up)
- TRTC/Male > Male POV (Mystery build-up)
- Go to your first class > Janitor POV (Air freshen branch)
- Wake up in 1 hour > Janitor POV (teacher branches)
- Hurry and stuff it in your pocket > cleanup and add content
- Ask principle for a band-aid > detention branch
Adventure:
- Go to town
- Go inside the log house
- To keep walking >fix branches
A Random Adventure:
So much random ya?
Adventure and Town of Barrhead:
Priority Pages
These pages have recently been categorized into the story and are in priority of editing before others:
Sid
- Sid/Magic > continue ground pound intro;leave open branch magic
- Sid/The Sea > home, negative, no-adventure option
- Sid/The Border > can't enter the border bc too dangerous
- Sid/The Beach > swim: get dragged into Atlantice
The Rush to Class
- TRTC/Apology > go home and feel bad. Cry yourself to sleep
- TRTC/Megan Talk > nod: be my friend > good friends
Clean-up
Quick-edits: Non-red-linked pages, but are in need of content/ grammar fixes/ options that don't end up in death.
Comments/Concerns/Compliments/Criticisms: "C-Section"
Put on here whatever discussion on the story you want to talk about.
