The Time Lord

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You are a 17 year old boy, intelligent, kind of good looking, a bit of a nerd and really lazy.
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You are an average 17-year-old girl. You're fairly intelligent as well as quite good-looking, and known for being a bit nerdy.
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Right now you are sitting in class and the teacher, Ms. Haller, is talking something about mathematics - you couldn't care less. Her boobs are the only reason you look to the front every once in a while. The classroom's packed with teenagers, some friends of you, some girls you find kind of attractive, a lot of people you care as much about as you do about mathematics. Your life isn't bad - actually, it's pretty good - but it's also really boring.
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You're sitting in mathematics, the most boring subject. Your teacher, Ms. Haller, is talking in her usual monotone voice about quadratics. Boooring. There's no one in your class who you can talk to. Despite a couple of hot guys, there's absolutely nothing entertaining to look at.
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You look out the window and watch the tree standing there. ''My god, sooooo boring'', you think to yourself - and then you notice that it got quiet. No talking anymore, nothing. You wonder what happened and look around. Everyone is just sitting there without moving the least bit. It kind of freaks you out. You look to the front and even Ms. Haller seems to be frozen in place. Her pose doens't look too comfortable.
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You decide to gaze out the window, watching the lush oak tree that stands on the front of campus. Suddenly, you notice that it's gotten suspiciously quiet. Not only is no one talking, the wind that was rustling the tree's leaves has ceased. There is absolutely no noise at all. Wondering what just happened, you look around only to see that everyone is simply sitting there without moving at all. Scared, you look to the front of the room and even Ms. Haller seems to be frozen in place.
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Suddenly, a man rushes into the classroom. He is wearing extremly funny clothes, but the situation and the look on his face, terrify you. ''What the fuck is happening?'', you think.
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Suddenly, a strange man that you've never seen before rushes into the classroom. He is wearing extremely weird clothes; a tweed jacket and bow tie that are just as unusual as his floppy mop of dark brown hair. He certainly looks funny, but the situation and the look on his face absolutely terrify you.
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The man looks around and finally sees you. He points at you and comes closer.
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The strange man looks around and his eyes brighten when they settle on you. He points in a determined fashion, making his way through your frozen classmates and towards you.
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'''Strange Man:''' "You! You move! You ... how can that be? No one is left. The war ... You're human, but you can still move, although it stopped. Really weird, really interesting, no time, they are getting closer. Hopefully we can talk about this later."
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'''Strange Man:''' You! You move! You ... how ... How are you doing that? No one is left! The war ... You're human, but you can still move! Quite unusual, rather interesting... Well, there's no time, they are getting closer... Are you coming, or not?
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You jumped up when the man got closer and now walk backwards, as he is still coming at you.
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'''Strange Man:''' "Do you know the big fountain in this town?"
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*[[Sit quietly. You're confused, and this stranger is freaking you out!]]
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*[[Ask the weird man who he is]]
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'''You:''' "Ah, yes ..."
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*[[Sit motionless, like your classmates, in an attempt to keep this man away from you]]
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'''Strange Man:''' "Good. Very good. Risky, but you'll have to do. You couldn't be tested, but you'll have to do. I give you my powers, which will make me disappear, use them with caution, you're not trained. Get to the fountain, use them there and everything will be explained. Save the galaxy, my friend - only you can!"
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You can't go any further, as you have reached the wall. The man leaps at you, touches your forehead with his finger and disappears into a golden mist. You feel something changing in your brain, it tickles for a moment and then it stops. Feeling dizzy, you walk back to your chair, sit down and suddenly all the noises are back. Everyone is moving again, Ms. Haller is talking about mathematics and nobody seems to have noticed anything.
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Wondering if it was all just a dream, you think about what just happened, and somehow use something in your head, you have never used before. You do it in a way, like you flex a muscle and suddenly everything stops again - and this time it was your doing!
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*[[The Time Lord/Go out of the school, the universe needs you|Go out of the school, the universe needs you]]
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*[[The Time Lord/Stay a little while longer|Stay a little while longer]]
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[[Category: The Time Lord]]
[[Category: The Time Lord]]

Revision as of 18:09, 5 June 2011

This story is fully open for editing, just try to keep the narration consistent with the existing pages.

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You are an average 17-year-old girl. You're fairly intelligent as well as quite good-looking, and known for being a bit nerdy.

You're sitting in mathematics, the most boring subject. Your teacher, Ms. Haller, is talking in her usual monotone voice about quadratics. Boooring. There's no one in your class who you can talk to. Despite a couple of hot guys, there's absolutely nothing entertaining to look at.

You decide to gaze out the window, watching the lush oak tree that stands on the front of campus. Suddenly, you notice that it's gotten suspiciously quiet. Not only is no one talking, the wind that was rustling the tree's leaves has ceased. There is absolutely no noise at all. Wondering what just happened, you look around only to see that everyone is simply sitting there without moving at all. Scared, you look to the front of the room and even Ms. Haller seems to be frozen in place.

Suddenly, a strange man that you've never seen before rushes into the classroom. He is wearing extremely weird clothes; a tweed jacket and bow tie that are just as unusual as his floppy mop of dark brown hair. He certainly looks funny, but the situation and the look on his face absolutely terrify you.

The strange man looks around and his eyes brighten when they settle on you. He points in a determined fashion, making his way through your frozen classmates and towards you.

Strange Man: You! You move! You ... how ... How are you doing that? No one is left! The war ... You're human, but you can still move! Quite unusual, rather interesting... Well, there's no time, they are getting closer... Are you coming, or not?

You...

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