Girl Scout Cookies/Editing Notes

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== Characters ==
== Characters ==
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Claire is definitely the assertive one of the pair.She is confident in her sexuality and while she does like sex and has gotten quite a lot of it in the past, she also knows how to use it to manipulate people.  It should be harder to get her to do what you want.  While she has large tits and ass and is overall a well-fleshed girl, she is not pudgy or overweight.  Claire is on the pill.   
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Claire is definitely the assertive one of the pair. She is confident in her sexuality and while she does like sex and has gotten quite a lot of it in the past, she also knows how to use it to manipulate people.  It should be harder to get her to do what you want.  While she has large tits and ass and is overall a well-fleshed girl, she is not pudgy or overweight.  Claire is on the pill.   
Lin is more naive and less confident.  She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience.  Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings.  She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one).  She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.
Lin is more naive and less confident.  She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience.  Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings.  She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one).  She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.
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== Poker ==
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== Endings ==
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The poker match shouldn't be edited yet; it's a work in progress.
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Each ending where the girls are happy and satisfied should link to one of the beginnings in the sequel [[Girl Scout Camp]].  See that stories [[Girl Scout Camp/Editing Notes#Beginnings|editing notes]] for details.
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There is a pattern to each of the pages:  The page named 'HandXYZ' refers to dealing the hand where Claire has X pieces of clothing left, Lin has Y and you have Z.  There are a maximum of 80 hand pages, although not all of them need to be used.  To determine the dealer, you add X, Y, and Z together and divide by three.  If the remaindier is 2, Lin deals; 1 means Claire deals, and 0 is for you.  The route that you took to reach that stage of undress doesn't matter.
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== Poker ==
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Each hand will have 2 (or 3) options for how to play it that determines who loses a piece of clothing.  (It is fair to have no-win scenarios.)  These options should be HandXYZa, HandXYZb, etc.  Each of those pages will have a single link 'Deal the next hand' that links to the appropriate new Hand page.  (The [[Girl Scout Cookies/Poker|starting page]] could rightly be called 'Hand433'.)
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Note that the game keeps going when you're naked, so 'Hand012' is a legitimate page.  The poker game ends when one person loses when they are naked.  The undress state of others shouldn't matter (although that has yet to be written).  I do '''not''' want every poker game to eventually end up at Hand000, although it might be reasonable to reduce everyone to their underwear and/or maybe make special allowences based on whether others are naked or not.
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As I said, this section is still a work in progress.
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Editors can feel free to revise some of the sections, expanding the descriptions and adding dialog, etc, but don't change the outcomes of any of the sections.
== Truth or Dare ==
== Truth or Dare ==
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* Offering Lin wine
* Offering Lin wine
* Many of the unfinished threads with Claire (under Peanut Butter Patties)
* Many of the unfinished threads with Claire (under Peanut Butter Patties)
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* All of the "good" endings can continue with Claire and Lin coming back for more (possibly bringing the troop with them?)
This is my first attempt at interactive fiction (erotic or otherwise).  Thanks.
This is my first attempt at interactive fiction (erotic or otherwise).  Thanks.
[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies| Girl Scout Cookies]]
[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies| Girl Scout Cookies]]

Current revision as of 13:58, 31 March 2011

Here are some basic notes about this adventure that may help contributors:

Contents

Characters

Claire is definitely the assertive one of the pair. She is confident in her sexuality and while she does like sex and has gotten quite a lot of it in the past, she also knows how to use it to manipulate people. It should be harder to get her to do what you want. While she has large tits and ass and is overall a well-fleshed girl, she is not pudgy or overweight. Claire is on the pill.

Lin is more naive and less confident. She is not a virgin, but has limited sexual experience. Because of this, she is easier to manipulate and is more likely to get carried away by her feelings. She does not wear a bra (her petite breasts don't need one). She is not on the pill and does worry about getting pregnant.

Endings

Each ending where the girls are happy and satisfied should link to one of the beginnings in the sequel Girl Scout Camp. See that stories editing notes for details.

Poker

Editors can feel free to revise some of the sections, expanding the descriptions and adding dialog, etc, but don't change the outcomes of any of the sections.

Truth or Dare

Don't know where I'm going to go with that one, but each page should have the choices 'Truth' and 'Dare' with the page names being the "round" of the game involved. (Truth1 and Dare1 are the first round, Truth2/Dare2 are the second, etc.) Note that the opposite rounds don't need uniqueness since you are picking a question or a action.

Where to contribute

  • The Twister section
  • The threesome section after Claire returns with the cookies (under the Thin Mints area)
  • Offering Lin wine
  • Many of the unfinished threads with Claire (under Peanut Butter Patties)
  • All of the "good" endings can continue with Claire and Lin coming back for more (possibly bringing the troop with them?)

This is my first attempt at interactive fiction (erotic or otherwise). Thanks.

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