Power Slice

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You raise your weapon to the sun in which a beam of light strikes the sword covering the sharpened steel with shining bright light, you look at the bedazzled Orc's and charged at them with lightning speed
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I raised my weapon to the sun in which a beam of light strikes the sword covering the sharpened steel with shining bright light, I look at the frightened creature and charged at it with lightning speed
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They tried to run away but you were too fast.
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It tried to run away but I was too fast.
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You struck the beasts with one ferocious holy strike, wounding the enemies with a deep glowing scar
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I struck the beasts with one ferocious holy strike, wounding the enemy with a deep glowing scar
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They fall to the ground with a heavy thud, mouth and eyes opened out of amazement
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It fell on the ground with a heavy thud
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You breath rapidly because of the amount of energy that you have used on the skill
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I breathed rapidly because of the amount of energy that I have used on the skill
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Your vision seems to be blurry and your head starts to hurt
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My vision seems to be blurry and my head starts to hurt
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The world around you starts to go black, you cant feel your legs or arms anymore with that you crash down to the ground
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The world around me starts to go black, I cant feel my legs or arms anymore!
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With that, you crash down to the ground
Not knowing a shadowy figure keeping an eye on you from the mountains above
Not knowing a shadowy figure keeping an eye on you from the mountains above
[[HR: Continue]]
[[HR: Continue]]
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[[Category: Hunteria's Rising]]

Current revision as of 21:38, 18 February 2015

I raised my weapon to the sun in which a beam of light strikes the sword covering the sharpened steel with shining bright light, I look at the frightened creature and charged at it with lightning speed

It tried to run away but I was too fast.

I struck the beasts with one ferocious holy strike, wounding the enemy with a deep glowing scar

It fell on the ground with a heavy thud

I breathed rapidly because of the amount of energy that I have used on the skill

My vision seems to be blurry and my head starts to hurt

The world around me starts to go black, I cant feel my legs or arms anymore!

With that, you crash down to the ground

Not knowing a shadowy figure keeping an eye on you from the mountains above

HR: Continue

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