Afraid of the Dark

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You look out the car windows the rows of forest trees passing by.  
You look out the car windows the rows of forest trees passing by.  
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The black car drove through the winding dirt road by the countryside. It was a quiet and bumpy drive as the road seemed uncared for or unused.  
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The black vintage car drove through the winding dirt road by the countryside. It was a quiet and bumpy drive as the road seemed uncared for or unused.  
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Two children sat inside with a man in his 40's it was a boring drive with no one bothering to talk. Only the radio hummed on the background playing a jazz beat.
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Two children sat inside with a man in his 40's it was a boring drive with no one bothering to talk. Only the radio hummed on the background playing a classic orchestra.
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The year was 1940
 
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You look out the car windows the rows of forest trees passing by.

The black vintage car drove through the winding dirt road by the countryside. It was a quiet and bumpy drive as the road seemed uncared for or unused. Two children sat inside with a man in his 40's it was a boring drive with no one bothering to talk. Only the radio hummed on the background playing a classic orchestra.


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