Smile back and accept his offer

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"Great." His smile broadens. "Hop in."  
"Great." His smile broadens. "Hop in."  
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He steps out of the car to help you with your bag and your heart flutters slightly.
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He steps out of the car to help you with your bag and your heart flutters slightly. You aren't quite used to such treatment, but you could see yourself very much getting used to this.
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You aren't quite used to such treatment, but you could see yourself very much getting used to this.
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"I'm Dan." He introduces himself.
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"I'm Dan," he introduces himself.
"I'm..." You pause to think a moment. "Jack..eline...Jacqueline." You smile nervously.
"I'm..." You pause to think a moment. "Jack..eline...Jacqueline." You smile nervously.
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"So...you more excited or nervous about today, Jackie?" He asks as he starts driving up toward the Welcome centre.
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"So...you more excited or nervous about today, Jackie?" he asks as he starts driving up toward the Welcome centre.
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"A bit of both..." You admit shyly.  
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"A bit of both..." you admit shyly.  
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"Maybe once you're done at the Welcome centre..." He glances at you. "I can help you carry your stuff to your dorm..."
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"Maybe once you're done at the Welcome Center..." He glances at you. "I can help you carry your stuff to your dorm..."
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Revision as of 01:21, 26 September 2008

"Great." His smile broadens. "Hop in."

He steps out of the car to help you with your bag and your heart flutters slightly. You aren't quite used to such treatment, but you could see yourself very much getting used to this.

"I'm Dan," he introduces himself.

"I'm..." You pause to think a moment. "Jack..eline...Jacqueline." You smile nervously.

"So...you more excited or nervous about today, Jackie?" he asks as he starts driving up toward the Welcome centre.

"A bit of both..." you admit shyly.

"Maybe once you're done at the Welcome Center..." He glances at you. "I can help you carry your stuff to your dorm..."

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