User talk:Bojangles
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Read the warning. If you post pages with bad spelling and poor grammar and incorrect punctuation in Rampage, I will delete it all. --Platypus 00:30, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
I strongly suggest you either start your own story or find a story by an author with lower standards than mine. I will not accept your writing in my stories. --Platypus 01:58, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
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Life of a 13 year old story
I think it's going great! Very erotic. Like a lot of the possibilities. Hope you do expand it to have the point of view of the other characters as well! Excellent start. -menatv
Thanks for your input. I'n still not done yet with the main plot since i just started last night. Once I finish the routes for the main 3 characters and proofread the grammar , I might make it public for everyone to add their own likings -Bojangles
With the recent policy changes, I thought you might appreciate a place where stories like Life of a 13 year old are acceptable as is. Feel free to join stories.allthefallen.ninja if you would like (yes it's a real site, but the system hates it when I try to post external links). You might even want to copy your story over there. --Elerneron 14:39, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
Views
It's the site, not you. Hopefully, RobKohr will get some of the issues with the site resolved shortly. --Platypus 09:16, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
Features
There is no designated person whose job is to update the Featured Story section, so if you'd like to put a story there, feel free to do so. --Platypus 09:14, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
Comments on my story?
Hey Bojangles, would you like to read my story The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra and let me know what you think?
I could also contribute to the Life of a 13 year old if you want - I think Rachel could have some lesbian adventures. Let me know what you think Hornlarry 20:46, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
I really hope there is more?
I just love how Alex can fuck his sister several times and in the ass as well,and she loves it.But I think there should be more like this,more occasions to go and fuck her,no matter where she is and for her to love it just like before.I hope I'm gonna see that or something similar in the story one day.Keep doing a amazing work with your story. --TheSecretUchiha 22:33, 25 September 2013 (UTC)
Your welcome
No worries, I understand not everyone is a native English speaker, and that not everyone is that good at grammar. I live in a non-English based country, and find myself struggling with the local language. More from vocabulary than anything. 中文很难。。。
One suggestion I have made to others is to write your stuff in something like Microsoft Word, then run a grammar check. After, you can copy and paste it into a page. Word, while not the best at grammar, can normally catch basic level problems. --Dirty Me 02:02, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
I read one of your latest posts, and...what you are describing is pretty much, well, impossible. You write about the reader's penis going into the cervix. The cervix opening is actually very small, and it opens for one thing: Birth. In fact, the cervix being hit is rather painful during sex. I guess, if you are not going for realism, it doesn't matter, but anatomically, what you describe, the penis going through the cervix opening and cumming directly into the womb, is impossible. Just for your reference I guess, up to you what you do or do not do with the information. --Dirty Me 06:19, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
You know, sometimes you just...scare me... --Dirty Me 10:32, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
Sorry, I realize that could come across bad. I am not judging you, or criticizing you, or anything else, with this last comment. Just making the comment... --Dirty Me 03:19, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
